JustVandal
Hello I'm the author! Here's a shameless review to myself. I would like to thank the people who supported this novel you guys are the best hands down. I hope to see you all in the future :o I plan to write a long story and to improve the writing chapter per chapter as much as I can so the readers could enjoy and feel immersed in the story. I would also like to add characters inspired by the supporters of this novel, so that I could thank them for their support.
Excellent prose with little to no grammatical errors. I like how the author builds up the ******* as each chapter progresses. Re: opening chapter, I suggest you don't include image links since webnovel does not support that format sadly and we can't view the linked images in the chapter. I think the only visual we can post here are our covers. Which should be original, otherwise, there might be copyright issues. Its better if you just describe the characters designs more vividly.
So it was really a good read and I am looking forward to reading more in future. the characters are designed very nicely, I also liked how the image link was shared for the beats or demons. The only regret is that the first volume came to an end a bit too soon. Please make the future volumes a bit longer. A very good job author.
A superb way of storytelling. I found the prologue to be really interesting. It's a little sad for the friend to sacrifice themselves though. I love the idea of travelling back in time over and over fascinating as the person tries to change their fate and can't. It is a miserable situation but surely there is a chance in taking action. A good job and interesting story. The author even gives us links to help us imagine the demons.đ
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