Review Detail of mssuigeneris in Heir's Fate (Hiatus)

Excellent prose with little to no grammatical errors. I like how the author builds up the ******* as each chapter progresses. Re: opening chapter, I suggest you don't include image links since webnovel does not support that format sadly and we can't view the linked images in the chapter. I think the only visual we can post here are our covers. Which should be original, otherwise, there might be copyright issues. Its better if you just describe the characters designs more vividly.