manny0101
What can I say, MC personality is sick. You may want a badass and OP MC but in this case, OP yes he is, but badass? not even close. The first few years in Hogwarts stay the same like canon, or worse its a fast walkthrough with MC commentary on the side. He doesnt even do anything at all. Just watching, while commenting like an asshat. MC interested with Genderbent Harry Potter or in this case Iris Potter when they met in front of whatever mirror hiding the phil stone. After that MC grew overprotective with Iris for no fkin reason, he just met with her, blushed, and went overprotective as well as trashtalking like he feels he Trump or something. And the most annoying thing in this fanfic is Author always switched POV in the middle of chapter, and author wrote again what MC has told us in Iris's POV. Its just like repeating the same boring things over and over again that I just skipped the whole POV changes. What a disappointment, but well anyway thanks for completing this. Atleast author got some balls to finish his fanfic while tons of them just outrightly dropped theirs, good or bad.
The story is a good one and I personally found it interesting till the end. This is a completed story, which means that there is no reason to fear it being abandond. If you have time and need something to read i would defenitly recommend reading it, as long as you don't hate harry potter and naruto.
This story is.... PERFECT!! It took one month for this story to get finished, that may be a short timeframe. But damn, this Harry Potter Fanfic is good, it's Harry Potter x Naruto (mainly Harry Potter). From the betrayal, redemption, and love at first sight, with a bit of comedy this story is borderline good. At first I was a bit stunned with the original MC being a female (Iris Potter) but it grew on me, the characters have their own personality, yet they have not much screen time it's enough to know who they are and why they're there. The ending is a bit rushed tbh, but at least it had an ending. So go read it! Stop reading this review and go read this hidden gem!
The first 20 chapters are Canon + stalker. After that, the story finally has changes worth a damn and grows to become a very entertaining fic. I rated it quite high as a result. I had wanted to drop the fic early on because nothing changed from canon. Then I stuck around out of curiosity if this guy would ever deviate from canon and was pleased to find he did, and from then on did so drastically. It was quite fun to see the author grow in his skills from then on out, he clearly was upset by the criticism, but managed to rise to the challenge by giving it his all. The result being that after chapter 20 the fic becomes pretty good! So chin up, author. You did great work and grew beyond anyones expectations despite the adversities. Well done.
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST OF NOT THE BEST HARRY POTTER FAN- FIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀 THE AUTHOR SHOULD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE MORE INTERESTING FAN FICS IF POSSIBLE ON LONG LIVE SUMMONS, DAMANCHI OR NOVELS LIKE SHOUJO GRAND SUMMONING ,E.T.C AS THEY ARE REALLY COOL ....ANYWAYS THANKS AGAIN FOR AN AUSOME FAN FIC😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊☺☺☺☺☺☺☺😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
It's decent compared to the stuff I have seen. Overall it's complete and it has a fast pace of moving through the plot. Most of the plot is poorly written but it's entertaining.if anything it's a short read and it's completed and I hope the author has grown since they wrote this.I want to ignore the author ranting but I have to mention it. Dude needs to chill and just understand not everyone cares, some people like to troll, and learn how to take feedback. If it can make your writing better you should try to understand every review and grow. So far the author is a whiny baby so I hope they have changed since this story is old.