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Luomaze

Luomaze

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2017-11-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze19h
    Commented

    is the story slowing down or the updates?

    Ch 90 Chapter 87 - Noblesse Oblige: Loyalty, Duty or Morals?
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    Crows x Souls
    Anime & Comics · QuackVader
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1d
    Commented
    "And then I was like, 'Bitch, what did I tell you, he wasn't good for you', but she didn't listen, did she?" Lucian said with a sigh. The girls around him started laughing, "You're so funny, Lucian," they giggled.
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze5d
    Replied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

    😂😂

    [Insert picture of Shmi here]
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze9d
    Replied to FirstHokage
    Yomi is now my girlfriend right, should I treat her differently, I never had a girlfriend, and even is even right to have a 7-year-old girlfriend 
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    Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
    Fantasy · FirstHokage
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze9d
    Posted

    Honestly I have no idea if this novel was planned out or just making up as we go. We got someone who lived an entire life and failed tremendously. Now in a new life they continue to fail tremendously. Honestly the main character makes no logical choices and it's like why even have included the second life when it doesn't mean anything. The pacing is horrible. I don't understand why it's so weird and it continues to get worse. The promise of the "volumes" getting better when this has been a mess since the start. The overall plot is just weird and contains so much filler I just can't explain it. The system itself is one of the worst story systems I have read. Just copy everyone else because what your system is doing is just worse. You really have something going on with the world and the story could be really good. I recommend you either finish this garbage and rewrite or just scrap it now and start making changes. This story could be so good but the more I read the more frustrating it is. For those thinking about reading or others in the middle of reading. Be prepared for a frustrating and an honest waste of time. Read at your own risk.

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    No More Pain For This Villain.
    Fantasy · Satan03
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze13d
    Replied to Raistlins_Ghost1

    AU my dude

    The first name on her list was John. An orphan from Eridanus II with remarkable physical strength and high cognitive ability. There were others like him too - Samuel, Kelly, Linda who showed promising results as well.
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    Halo Reborn
    Video Games · Dr_Dred
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze13d
    Posted

    My rating is not honest because I would rate lower but it would probably get deleted. It's really a 2 star for the story and overall the content is just dumb. Honestly most Korean stories on this site are just the main character being a servant who can't make logical choices. They get in trouble with someone in a higher position and eventually they figure stuff out. If you are here for plot it sucks. If you are here for the other reason it's alright.

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    My Adopted Family
    Anime & Comics · _Er
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze13d
    Commented
    "I'm not a resentful person; if you want to leave things here, it won't bother me later, so you don't have to worry." Damian knew he wasn't comfortable being friends with people who once wanted to harm him, but he could let go of that hatred or distrust over the years.
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    Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary
    Book&Literature · SrCuervo
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze16d
    Commented

    nah it's every other week something new happens. bro you got bad luck or you got cursed

    My apology for suddenly disappearing on you guys without so much as a word. Grandma died, had to do a make up for a compulsory course or risk failing it, and still searching for a new apartment. Last week was too...floozy for me, if that's an accurate word.
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    Crows x Souls
    Anime & Comics · QuackVader
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze22d
    Commented
    I can't say for certain how long she keeps yelling and trying to finger-bang me out of existence, but eventually, she slows her assault down, before completely stopping it.
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    A New Sun (Highschool DxD Shinto Demigod SI-OC)
    Anime & Comics · Karmic_Wizard
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze28d
    Replied to DavidNk

    probably I mean it's miles spider abilities

    I needed a shave or else I'd end up looking like an impoverished Afro Samurai.
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    Spider-Man X.
    Anime & Comics · Saintbarbido
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze28d
    Commented

    Spyro

    Issue #32: X, Spyra.
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    Spider-Man X.
    Anime & Comics · Saintbarbido
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze28d
    Commented

    The story for awhile now is getting boring.

    Ch 168 Chapter 168: A Magnificent Creation
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    Harry Potter: Another Chance
    Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented

    Down on your knees for more Chinese stuff i see.

    "Ingen Ryuki was a Chinese poet, calligrapher, and monk of Linji Chan Buddhism from China. He is best known for founding the Obaku school of Zen in Japan. He is also famous for introducing Ming Dynasty style calligraphy to this country during the Edo Period." 
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented
    "I am sorry for her rude actions." Kiyotaka apologized, but Mizuto could tell that this guy was jealous, which made him speechless. 
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented
    With that question, Yume knew that Mizuto had made a lot of money. 
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented

    Alright to many Chinese things . I can ignore the food but feet?

    He turned and couldn't help but stare at Yume. Unlike before, she had changed her clothes to a white short-sleeved blouse tucked inside under the high-waisted gray skirt that reached her ankle. She might not wear her usual tights, but her bare feet definitely weren't bad. They were white, smooth, and cute, but he knew he couldn't stare at them for so long. 
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented
    Name: Mizuto Irido. 
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented
    "Also, that he finally gets help for his performance problems," I solemnly add, not the slightest bit shocked, "seriously, no wonder he lives here alone with his mother in the dimensional version of a basement."
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    A New Sun (Highschool DxD Shinto Demigod SI-OC)
    Anime & Comics · Karmic_Wizard
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  • Luomaze
    Luomaze1mth
    Commented
    "Apologize to me," I command, "for being born into my world."
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    A New Sun (Highschool DxD Shinto Demigod SI-OC)
    Anime & Comics · Karmic_Wizard
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