Reviews of Harry Potter and the Forger of Worlds

Well... I drop it. For many reasons, one of them it that it's boring. But you know, it's good fan-fic, just not for me. But you can try it, it's free :D Maybe you'll like it.

The Book is very good. The Writing makes me feel attracted to the story, because I like MC and also because he speak his mind. Genneraly i think this is a very good story, because the world building is carefully planed and very well thought out. And because of that i give it a 4.8

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Ain’t this the dude who threatens old little cross with pitch forks.... HOW DARE YOU *COUGH* you should try pepper spray next time *COUGH* treat cross like that you should’ve *cough* burn him in the stake *cough* treated him better

This needs more attention. MOAR of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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