3. 8 from me for this story Good poitns Crafting even if it's gets a bit lost in the later chap. Some humor Out of the box storyline in HP world Negativs To much foreshadowing Power balance is all over the place Either make a Underdog Mc or an OP Mc bur this mixed mag sends mix massages, this hole Samuel the antagonistic villian that sends his minions and fucks with the worldlaws that the Mc made gives it a vibe of a bad 90's cartoon series. All in all the story is quit entertaining but just not my cup of tea
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