Review Detail of the_game01234567 in Harry Potter and the Forger of Worlds

my opinion:Hope the author continues this fanfic my criticism(i might be allittle harsh but criticism is not betrayal but i really like this fanfic): The intro is confusing so I will break it down: Basically there is a dimension separate from Harry Potter Verse which is called the Void. The Void contains powerful creatures or existences which is our MC, the Forger, whom is married and the conflict is gathering the soul fragments that the main antagonist decides to mess up. Once this is cleared up, the reader who likes the slow well developed story will further appreciate this fanfic.