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Reviews of Harry Potter - Scion of House Ignis

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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Loyal_Hunter
Loyal_HunterAuthorLoyal_Hunter

If not even the author can give himself a shameless 5 star review then who can? This story may be trash, but it's my trash. ...............

Jyggalag
JyggalagLv4Jyggalag

In my opinion below average. Pretty much cliche fanfiction. If you read one you read them all. Worst of all there's are a.....TALKING SYSTEM! The worst kind! It speaks like--- 'Hello, young one' like the fuk Lol?! Moreover, cliche dumbledore is apparently bad etc. It would be more unique to see the point of view of a pureblood society or something however here mc I feel is another pro muggle proud nonsense type character which is boring. ; Lastly, apparently, he is supposed to be a pureblood but is raised by muggles or something??-why not be a muggle-born then?!I want something different you know... :(

Dayside
DaysideLv4Dayside

Well written, close to 0 grammatical errors. Updates were pretty high for now, though I do expect it to drop a bit after the start. Story development is as generic as possibly can be so far. The main character has nothing interesting or unique about him. World background is just mostly canon HP with a few additions like the generic magic core thing and a few new families and one girl that isn't canon.

TheLonelyCup
TheLonelyCupLv3TheLonelyCup

The story has good grammar and it’s entertaining even though there’s only 3 chapters but I’m looking forward to reading more as you release it. Oh yeah if you ever need help editing I don’t mind helping you out because I feel like this story and you have a lot of potential.

AAM0825
AAM0825Lv3AAM0825

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 great, I hope you don't drop

BreadGrasper
BreadGrasperLv4BreadGrasper

Writing quality: pretty good in the first place compared to allot of the stuff I've read, it gets better further into the book. Barely any mistakes in grammar either. Stability of updates: good, a little bit unstable with gaps every now and then that only last a few days. Story development: amazing, delves into the world it's set in and even builds up more. Character design: great, for once the characters actually feel like real people and act like a real person unlike many other books that make the side-characters cater to the mc every whim and seem to only exist for the mc. world background: the author mentions unnecessary characters and makes it apparent that the world isn't halted around the mc and that there is other stuff happening that the mc isn't apart of. it gives a sense of realism that you don't get with other books that pretend that only the stuff that is happening around the mc is important. it shows that there is more going on than what you see.

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv5Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Grass_Cutter
Grass_CutterLv2Grass_Cutter

Very good I like the concept 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Shannon1223
Shannon1223Lv6Shannon1223

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HorizonCrown
HorizonCrownLv4HorizonCrown

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BRgames_00
BRgames_00Lv1BRgames_00

Es el primer fanfic del universo de Harry Potter,y me gusto mucho,el personaje principal es serio pero con sus toques de humor,en perfecto equilibrio,en conclusión:Un buen fanfic

usui1202
usui1202Lv3usui1202

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Henrique_Paiao
Henrique_PaiaoLv6Henrique_Paiao

😗😗😃😅😚😃😅😂😗😃😉😉🤣😊😍🤗😚😅😀😎😙😎😙😎🤔😉😃😉😂😗😃😂😚😍🙃😊😋😍😙🤣😘😙🤣😘😆😘😉🤣😘😆🤣😘😗🤣😄😙😎🤔😍😚😍😎😚😋🤔😙🤔😋🤔😗😋🤔😆🤣😄😗😗😃😅😚😃😅😂😗😃😉😉🤣😊😍🤗😚😅😀😎😙😎😙😎🤔😉😃😉😂😗😃😂😚😍🙃😊😋😍😙🤣😘😙🤣😘😆😘😉🤣😘😆🤣😘😗🤣😄😙😎🤔😍😚😍😎😚😋🤔😙🤔😋🤔😗😋🤔😆🤣😄

neguin
neguinLv3neguin

Good.................... ................................................................................,.................................................................................................

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 great, I hope you don't drop

fanficlover1998
fanficlover1998Lv5fanficlover1998

This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.This is becoming so good author. Cant wait for more to read.

fanficlover1998
fanficlover1998Lv5fanficlover1998

Looks good. Grammar is neat. Plot is progressing well. The MC is likeable. The chapters are good. And the update rate is consistent. Cant wait to read more from you author.

Xandalar
XandalarLv4Xandalar

t 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Enjoyteddy
EnjoyteddyLv5Enjoyteddy

So this has been interesting so far, and the way the system is integrated into the story is quite clever I thought. The chapter length and grammar are both solid. I hope that you continue to write and everyone else should remember to rate and review!

_Kaitlin_
_Kaitlin_Lv4_Kaitlin_

I give you four point four stars for this book review. I just finished reading your chapters and I really enjoyed it. My only qualms were your lack of capitalization sometimes, how you sometimes forgot what you wrote in previous chapters, and that you haven’t updated in 3 months apparently.