Loyal_Hunter
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I really don't plan on doing that. By the time he's in 4th year, he'll have done many things that are away from canon/plot. It won't just be him getting stronger with plot happening in the background, he will change canon events and experience things that aren't in canon, go to other countries, interact with other families, etc. It won't end at Hogwarts either, there'll be more after that.
No, there are no quests, there is no assigning stat points into intelligence or strength or whatever either. There is also no store. As he gets stronger and/or older, it gives him more knowledge and helps with his development and growth. The system will not handicap him in any way. There are no quests where he gets a penalty or something, there is also no magical store where he can buy and materialise pretty much anything. It was made by his ancestors to aid in his growth, not hand over everything to him immediately.
It is definitely not canon, this is fanfiction and there are many things different here from canon. In canon, Harry didn't suffer from physical abuse, he was just neglected but here that's what happened.
I won't be updating for like another week. I'm gonna try planning this story out a bit instead of doing my usual and just writing whatever, that's a surefire way to make plot holes and errors. I also have to go to college now and that's giving me a lot less free-time than i'm used to, not to mention how I have to wake up at specific times again, so sorry BigBoobs, I shall not be updating this fic for a bit.
What's the point in being a genius if you can't have some fun.
He was acting muggle-raised, he wouldn't know his wand hand and would just have to think he's left handed because that's his writing hand and stuff, of course he knew he was left handed.
All you have to do is put the Rocky theme song on loop, it's a training arc.. that doesn't end. Alright, I will admit that I spent quite a bit too long on just training instead of blending school stuff, social interactions and just other different aspects. Third year will hopefully be different instead of just training and stuff.
I'm sure that this fic is full of plot holes, there's no way that there aren't any, but I literally said 'it seems I resemble my father a lot more than my mother'. He didn't say that he knew what his father looked like, just that it seemed he'd not inherited his looks from his mother and instead resembled his father.
F*uck the Lestranges, they can get the damn Eagle! Raven is way better than an eagle!
Scroll to the end of the last chapter.
I really never understood the whole insulting part of the word 'muggle'. Sure, the 'purebloods' think 'muggles' are beneath them but the word 'muggle' isn't inherently offensive. It's a word made to distinguish magical people from non-magical people born from non-magical families, and that's exactly what it achieves. No mag, muggle, mundane, who really cares? The word gets the job done just fine.
I googled it and well; 'Of course, there are style guides that discourage it, but it's perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with “but” when writing. ... Using any stylistic quirk too frequently spoils your writing. By all means, start sentences with “but” from time to time, but remember that “but” also belongs after a comma' Seems fine to me, not really breaking immersion or anything.. probably.
Yea, I know but when I was writing I was just like, "Pssh, it's 2020, just add a capital on that b*tch"
It's literally explained in this very paragraph.. he just thought of a room that he could apparate in using the ROR.
I guess I'm just an idiot. When I pictured a tennis ball and pool ball next to each other, to me the tennis ball was quite a bit bigger.
I've read so many betrothal fanfics on fanfiction. net that i'm almost tired of them. It was always Harry/Daphne betrothal contract from like 200 years ago and I don't know, I prefer the MC to be able to choose things like that instead of being forced into it through a magical contract, though I'll try to add romance in the next few years, year 1 and 2, they were 11 and 12 which is just too young for romance imo, but now is fine, though I really don't know if I can write entertaining romance, i'll try my best.