Webnovelavatar

Review Detail of Dayside in Harry Potter - Scion of House Ignis

Review detail

Dayside
DaysideLv45mthDayside

Well written, close to 0 grammatical errors. Updates were pretty high for now, though I do expect it to drop a bit after the start. Story development is as generic as possibly can be so far. The main character has nothing interesting or unique about him. World background is just mostly canon HP with a few additions like the generic magic core thing and a few new families and one girl that isn't canon.

alt

Harry Potter - Scion of House Ignis

Loyal_Hunter

Liked by 11 people

LIKE

Replies3

NineOrchid
NineOrchidLv4NineOrchid

Thanks for the review.

Loyal_Hunter
Loyal_HunterAuthorLoyal_Hunter

When you wrote this review, the story was barely in Hogwarts, maybe not even that. I've already added quite a few more elements into the fic for it to be less 'generic' than just copying canon and I haven't even started 3rd year, which will be far more eventful and different than the first 2 years and will add a lot more things that are most definitely not 'canon'. In this fic, the MC will do more interesting things that are further away from canon as he becomes older, more knowledgeable and stronger. I also plan on continuing his adventures past Hogwarts and into the life of an ad-ult. Even now, I think it is too early to review this fic as 'generic' as I haven't added any of the larger ideas that I have for this fic. I could just delete your review or something but that would make me seem like someone who can't take any sort of criticism, I just prefer my fic to be criticised on parts that actually need criticism at that moment in time. I would just like to say that I don't plan on making this a fic that is a carbon copy of canon with just a different protagonist. Thank you for the review.

Dayside
DaysideLv4Dayside

Perhaps I shall give it another shot then?

Loyal_Hunter:When you wrote this review, the story was barely in Hogwarts, maybe not even that. I've already added quite a few more elements into the fic for it to be less 'generic' than just copying canon and I haven't even started 3rd year, which will be far more eventful and different than the first 2 years and will add a lot more things that are most definitely not 'canon'. In this fic, the MC will do more interesting things that are further away from canon as he becomes older, more knowledgeable and stronger. I also plan on continuing his adventures past Hogwarts and into the life of an ad-ult. Even now, I think it is too early to review this fic as 'generic' as I haven't added any of the larger ideas that I have for this fic. I could just delete your review or something but that would make me seem like someone who can't take any sort of criticism, I just prefer my fic to be criticised on parts that actually need criticism at that moment in time. I would just like to say that I don't plan on making this a fic that is a carbon copy of canon with just a different protagonist. Thank you for the review.