Mangadonf
Quality - ⭐⭐ Update -⭐⭐⭐⭐ Plot -⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character -⭐⭐⭐ Background -⭐⭐⭐ Overall, 3.2. My biggest issues has been the inconsistency regarding writer's English, be it spelling or grammar or even structural integrity of sentences are loss over me. And another main issue has been the interaction between charcters, from Side characters to the MC, everyone's matter of speech and conversation has been an overly ridiculous thing, that seems to mock the idea of story telling of real and emotive nature.
I have mixed feelings about this fanfic. On the one hand, it's a face slap cringe fanfic where the author ignored an absurd amount of detail compared to the original material and just forced a scenario where the mc would be the "garbage" of the Gremory family. On the other hand it's an interesting fanfic about a mc crafter with really good ideas. If it wasn't for the last chapters I could probably ignore the beginning of the fanfic as water under the bridge as it seemed to have improved, unfortunately the cringe factor of the last chapters was more than 8000. In conclusion (no spoilers) if you like a face slap cringe story where we have entire chapters of the mc just giving the face slap and then justifying this fanfic is for you. I even believe it would be a good fanfic if the mc didn't have to do it all by himself, if the author let other characters around support the MC in those moments, so the scene doesn't become an arrogant monologue on the MC's part, it could be more interesting . If you don't like these cringe situations, this is still a reasonable and interesting fanfic to read, however you need to be patient to endure the forced slap face cringe chapters if you want to enjoy the fanfic.
Leaving a review becuz i dont know why the rating is loe.Those people commenting trash reviews are those who havent even read it properly,Yes it burns sliw but it starts taking pace and its really Great.Clincheness is at the start and as for that maid....Finish fking reading it first cuz it has a nice development and good comedy.Dont listen to those dogs barking when they didnt even finish till the latest chaps
Im writing this review because there are a lot of whiny boys in the recommendation section. The author gave an unique spin to his fanfic which I can respect, since the author has his mc communicate with heroines 15 years before their original debute it’s quite obvious he has a big influence on their character. Especially the pre teens that are protecting Rias, she basically grew up with an inferiority complex despite being told she was better then mc. Ofcourse her character will recieve differences from the cannon. Highly recommend this fic so far since the author is actually doing fun and reasonable stuff with the universe itself.
A really good DxD fan-fic. Kinda reminds me of overgeared. The MC's talent is mainly in crafting, so he crafts armor and all and uses them. Things which I didn't like : 1. The MC makes questionable decisions. -> Like it's ok if he wants a loyal maid, but he searches for the ugliest ones. I mean why not an average one or someone who's in desperate situations. -> The MC asks for a veto right on his marriage. He should have outright left the family. As it has no benefits so far and instead has drawbacks. As his family influences his decisions and all. 2. He doesn't use the OC storyline to his advantage a lot. I mean i get it if he wants to let the original timeline proceed as it was. But still he can influence somethings without changing the timeline a lot. Like maybe some hidden characters or something. 3. He lets his family get away with it. He's literally abandoned by his family until he gets noticed by Odin and becomes famous. His father takes away his achievement. And the MC doesn't do anything drastic. Like he could have used this chance to remove his name from the family. Which would save a lot of trouble for him in future. All in all. Really good so far. Character Development is subpar. The MC is smart and all but makes questionable choices. Hope the author improves the story and grammar in the coming chapters.
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Sorry for my two in writing stability. I'm a new reader and binged read 55 chapters in one sitting, so I'm not sure of updates. Onto important stuff. The novel is good, I'm suprised I kept reading considered how a certain house was portrayed since I'm a huge fan of it, I'm not naming house hold for spoler reasons. Author great novel you know how to keep me reading even if i disagreed with some of your novel. thanks for the hard work you truly deserve it
Amazing story !!!! thanks author !!! you made my day, I juste read tour story without stopping!! More please !![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]