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A really good DxD fan-fic. Kinda reminds me of overgeared. The MC's talent is mainly in crafting, so he crafts armor and all and uses them. Things which I didn't like : 1. The MC makes questionable decisions. -> Like it's ok if he wants a loyal maid, but he searches for the ugliest ones. I mean why not an average one or someone who's in desperate situations. -> The MC asks for a veto right on his marriage. He should have outright left the family. As it has no benefits so far and instead has drawbacks. As his family influences his decisions and all. 2. He doesn't use the OC storyline to his advantage a lot. I mean i get it if he wants to let the original timeline proceed as it was. But still he can influence somethings without changing the timeline a lot. Like maybe some hidden characters or something. 3. He lets his family get away with it. He's literally abandoned by his family until he gets noticed by Odin and becomes famous. His father takes away his achievement. And the MC doesn't do anything drastic. Like he could have used this chance to remove his name from the family. Which would save a lot of trouble for him in future. All in all. Really good so far. Character Development is subpar. The MC is smart and all but makes questionable choices. Hope the author improves the story and grammar in the coming chapters.

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