TurkishJesus
isn't the MC fat too weak Witcher power are a joke in dxd no they are trash the most you can with them is basic of basic of the basics it's redundant better use human magic or any other type of magic I don't know why your so persistent on this Witcher powers honestly since you will simply write yourself on a corner later on since most of the cast advance in powerscale rather quickly and significantly while the MC is a basic bitch no offense bro the power set is too weak for me to just tune out my brain most cast can arleast react and avoid light
The real Mc is the sword grandmaster mother of the Mc that has a harem of the best girls like Yasaka in 10 minutes and is a real Alpha. The Mc even though he has golden finger is a beta that needs 40+ chapters to get Rossweisse even when she is desperate for a man and with 2 lifetimes of sword art knowledge he loses from his mother.
Writing Quality: Not bad, but there are some spelling errors that get consistently repeated. Stability of Updates: It was basically mass uploaded over 3 days. Story Development: It started out really good, but then devolved into crack once it hit cannon. Character Design: Extreme and unrealistic character portrayals. The villains look more normal than normal people. As I said about Story Development - what may have been good at the beginning devolved into crack. World Background: You get a 4 in the beginning and a 1 at the end - I'd give you a 2.5 instead of a 3 total but the rating system does not allow fractions. You actually expanded on cannon at the start. Then ruined it at the end. Overall: Excellent start that gets a person invested enough to read the story, before ruining it by turning into a crack story that you keep reading. A perfect example of the sunken cost fallacy in action. Please edit chapers 20+ to prevent the decline of the story.
The story had an excellent premise and beginning. It was thrilling to read and was wnjoyable to follow the main characters adventures and relationships. The shipping was strong. Then the author chose to change things in the second act and basically change the entire direction of the story. So much so that it became a rehash of the DxD canon only with training here and there for the cast . Botto. line after reading 30 chapters I let this one go for bad story development. I believe the Author is a good writer but just got bored with this work.
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