Writing Quality: Not bad, but there are some spelling errors that get consistently repeated. Stability of Updates: It was basically mass uploaded over 3 days. Story Development: It started out really good, but then devolved into crack once it hit cannon. Character Design: Extreme and unrealistic character portrayals. The villains look more normal than normal people. As I said about Story Development - what may have been good at the beginning devolved into crack. World Background: You get a 4 in the beginning and a 1 at the end - I'd give you a 2.5 instead of a 3 total but the rating system does not allow fractions. You actually expanded on cannon at the start. Then ruined it at the end. Overall: Excellent start that gets a person invested enough to read the story, before ruining it by turning into a crack story that you keep reading. A perfect example of the sunken cost fallacy in action. Please edit chapers 20+ to prevent the decline of the story.
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