Reviews of Ghidorah to anime Multiverse

First and foremost, your writing needs and can be improved. I decided to read this today due to the summary I've read and the Rating. I quickly became disappointed. I could barely finish a few chapters before I had to stop. It wasn't enjoyable reading due to your way of writing. To me, it looks like Machine Translation. I don't know if English is your primary language. If it is... I recommend you read what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved before publishing a chapter. If English is not your primary language, you have enough skill with the English language to create a story that can be understood. However, that skill can be vastly improved. Rereading what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved will help increase your skill with the English language regardless of whether the English language is your primary language or not. I know this from experience. That is all.

This is the fanfic that I am looking for. Very hidden huh, Cultivation and Pokemon games, I played pokemon saphirre so I can relate of this.. and this lit not in the series or pokemon worrld. How niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

IN A NUT: MC re;inced in a runaway trash young master who couldn't handle being born in a family with extraordinary siblings... REVIEW: In a place filled with fanfics of declining quality, this is truly a hidden gem... wouldn't have read it if I wasn't bored... Thanks for your hardwork and pls don't drop....

I’m very interested in how the story is going to play out. Not only that i like how u apply pokemons in this world.👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

To be honest I just don't like the pov of this fic, however I do have to say is that this is a good fic. I hop you can continue, but I will be dropping this from library.

A work worthy of The Unnamed God Sect! Crazy! Senseless! Exaggerated! References everywhere! Emojis! Lord Zombie himself is here to stamp his seal of approval on that! Brother Senju Sesshomaru keep it up! ( •̀‿• ́)ﻭ✧

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good work its a good novel worth reading i hope you have 1000+ collections some day and 10000+ review good luck and work hard i will support you.

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The story is well-written and fun to read. It doesn't deter you from scrolling next for another chapter. You can binge this easily. Most importantly, it's readable. Ah, did you know? The author is part of sect! The name was.. the Unnamed God Sect! Right, right! Join the Unnamed God Sect! This fanfic master will be there!

This is my fanfic story reading and... Ah ah ah... I love it... love it a lot... The story has a good taste in my eyes, okay that's weird... But anyway, I really love it... More more more [img=update][img=update][img=update]

This book is so great! Loved the plot. So unique 💙 I am totally hooked. Can't wait for the next chapters!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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so like are you rewriting the novel or just dropping this fanfic was pretty nice aside from the mc's stupid moment................................

I love your work 10/10 I like the concept, mC is a bit dumb sometimes but human error i understand, storyline is good and the opness of the character is just right, Pacing is alright as well buT a faster pace of 30% more Will be apprIciAted, just keep being you! Cant wait for more!

DISGUSTING---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BUT I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY lol jk it's actually good lol-- I'm cheering for remy! :D me like his personality hehe! Also, you have a unique writing style, croccy! It's kinda fun to read! :D ALSO YOUR COVER IS HMMM REALLY TASTEFUL

if you are writing what am i thinking this will be good(i hope you are writing to fight with pokemon in multiverse

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