Thanks for the chapter.

Fate or Jaune

+1

I like how he is and how you are going about giving him more substance then other main characters I've read on this platform. Just remember, Devas is Human. I recommend not killing his overall humanity like those is most cultivation novels do or really most Chinese novels I've read before I stopped reading lean towards doing. All the greatest characters of any book are the characters you can relate to. No matter the good or bad they've done. Keep him sentimental but Devas as a character will one day dive into the darker part of humanity like the fear he saw in his minds cape or dreamscape. That too will shape him as a character depending on how he will go about either running from or facing his fear.

Just remembered he's around 13 to 15 years old despite looking in his 20s. He may have the knowledge beyond his years but he neither has the understanding or wisdom of it.

This is one of the good stories on this site. If you haven't started reading this I would recommend you do so if you like both Naruto and My Hero Academia. Stories like this one is rare on this site. The reason for the 4.2 score is because of the updates and background. They are slightly lacking but the short length of the chapters is the primary reason for the score. If the chapters covered more than simply small parts then reading this would be more enjoyable. Chapter 37 was good in writing quality, but mostly a disappointment regarding the content. The lack of thereof to be more precise. It was more like a teaser rather than a chapter. Hopefully the chapters in the future will either be longer or contain more content then rather teasing about future content. Regardless, this is a mostly good read so far.

useless saber!? Even if you barely know how to use it that thing can cut through just about anything! no sword in game of thrones can stand up to a lightsaber it will cut through them like a hot knife through butter

I enjoy the story. I find it much more in depth and accurate compared to other fan fictions that crossover RWBY and Dragon Ball. Though, not all of it is fully accurate regarding the power levels between RWBY and Dragon Ball but with how the story made its foundation made up the difference. All in all I find this fan fiction High Quality and a good read.

Daenerys Targaryen

I like the story.

Ty Lee or Toph? Why not both? I vote Both

This is a fan-fiction..................................................................................................................................................................................

A glass of water and sweet tea.

I have no good words for the "Wow. I usually condemn cowards that resort to self-immolation and explosives to take out their enemies" part. The only people I can see actually say that are those who never experienced true hardship and are delusional, living in their own little world like a frog in a well.

Ma dude!

He seems to more obsessed with them as if they are objects rather than people...

He had a wish to add a stronger mind so he wouldn't lose himself when transformed... and you do this anyway.

That's short. Very short.

The author doesn't know much about the Saiyan race it seems...

Her Immortality is tied between her Earth, the Land of Shadows, and the magical properties she received from the blood of her fallen enemies. She's no longer connected to the Land of Shadows or fully connected to her Earth any longer either in your story. Her only Immortality now comes from the properties she received from the blood of her fallen enemies. She now may be simply ageless. So, all anti-immortal weapons or abilities will most likely work on her now.