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  • shubham90000
    shubham9000024d
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    it's a good story the character development is also good[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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    THe Villain
    Contemporary Romance · tanu_sam
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900001mth
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    u should use 'me' word here 'can u tell me' like that.

    "Can you tell who's this person who left this mark?" Asked Lucian
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    Annabelle Ashborn
    Fantasy Romance · Dream_blue98
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900001mth
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    I think u should use don't on the place of can't.

    " I'm not sure about that, there are many things about you that we can't understand. And you can agree on that right??" said the girl as she put some food in her mouth.
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    Annabelle Ashborn
    Fantasy Romance · Dream_blue98
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900001mth
    Commented

    hmm maybe you should put 'you' like I told you that it's bullshit

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    Annabelle Ashborn
    Fantasy Romance · Dream_blue98
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900001mth
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    there is a mistake here

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    Annabelle Ashborn
    Fantasy Romance · Dream_blue98
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900002mth
    Posted

    This is a good novel character development is also good keep up the good work[img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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    Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge
    Contemporary Romance · xAlexiax
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900002mth
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    this is sooo good pls continue writing more chapters[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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    The Typhoon's Dangerous Wife
    Contemporary Romance · tanu_sam
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900002mth
    Posted

    It's a good book there r some mistakes like u didn't use commas and some spelling mistakes. Please correct your mistakes so that readers can enjoy this book.

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    The World After 9000 Years
    Sci-fi · shubham914427
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900002mth
    Posted

    Good quality and character development .........................................................................................................

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    The Celestial Saga
    Fantasy Romance · _mystique_
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900003mth
    Posted

    a good story is made by the imagination of a writer who knows how to put his thoughts in words you have the quality but you can improve more, try to fix your previous mistakes other than some small mistakes your story is good keep up the good work.

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    Annabelle Ashborn
    Fantasy Romance · Dream_blue98
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900003mth
    Posted

    good work its a good novel worth reading i hope you have 1000+ collections some day and 10000+ review good luck and work hard i will support you.

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    Soul-Beast Tamer
    Anime & Comics · Bad_Totodile
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  • shubham90000
    shubham900003mth
    Posted

    good I like your work its good and don't believe CROCO review HE LITRALLY GIVES EVERYONE A BAD REVIEW THIS NOVEL IS GOOD. I support you my friend work hard.

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    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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