Review Detail of Extant in Ghidorah to anime Multiverse

First and foremost, your writing needs and can be improved. I decided to read this today due to the summary I've read and the Rating. I quickly became disappointed. I could barely finish a few chapters before I had to stop. It wasn't enjoyable reading due to your way of writing. To me, it looks like Machine Translation. I don't know if English is your primary language. If it is... I recommend you read what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved before publishing a chapter. If English is not your primary language, you have enough skill with the English language to create a story that can be understood. However, that skill can be vastly improved. Rereading what you have written with the intention to analyze your writing for what can be improved will help increase your skill with the English language regardless of whether the English language is your primary language or not. I know this from experience. That is all.