ariam_N_M
First off, really good story. The character's are introduced well and their interactions are fun and enjoyable to read. The world building is unique and really fleshes out the setting. I enjoyed the writing style, even if there were a few errors. This is an awesome story and I'm happy to give it it's 10th review. Great job author and keep up the good work.
First, great summary. Really struck a chord in my heartstrings. The story is amazing! It's got a very detailed science fiction feel, makes it quite interesting to read cause the detailing is not too much, not too less- just right. The conversations are good and realistic and scenes change smoothly. Good job author!
The author sure knows how to write. You got a great style of writing. I liked it. Genevieve's character is interesting. Although I did find few errors here and there, I'm assuming they'll be fixed after proofreading. So, 5 stars for you author because of this interesting plot. I would have given 4.8 because of those errors. But, they are minor ones that can be fixed right away. Lastly, as a suggestion, I'll say ~ Try to break down the long paragraphs. P.S ~ Keep up the good work!!