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Lonewo1f

Lonewo1f

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Here to bring my imaginations come alive through words. A lazy guy who loves to sketch and sing. And, also to write in my free time. Do check out my novel - Ghost Busters :-P

2019-05-03 JoinedIndia
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Lonewo1f

    *doubts

    Ch 111 Heading towards a Trove
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    wevwjwvwjqwv
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I have some doubt regarding contracts brother. This isn't the right place to ask but I'll ask anyway. I applied for webnovel non-exclusive contract and they have accepted it. They were offering the royalty contract but I rejected it. Should I accept their non-exclusive contract?

    Ch 111 Heading towards a Trove
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    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    What a great work. I hardly have 5 or 6 books in my library. And, I think this will gonna stay for long. Loved the writing style a lot (found some errors but can be fixed during proofreading). I have read 16 chapters right now. And, I already knew this is going to be a great work. Keep it up author!

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    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasy · d_nmalory
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to d_nmalory

    Thanks a lot! ✨

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    A great read indeed. I liked the cover. It's simple yet very eye catching. The story's pace is good for now. I don't think it's rushing or have a slow pace. I saw some tenses off the bats here and there. As for grammar I didn't find any errors for now (maybe a few). Overall, a nice read.

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    The Legendary Daddy Merchant
    Fantasy · BlueBlueLemon
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to BlueBlueLemon

    Thanks a lot mate! This is my first work. I hope, it will get recognized. ✨

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Kandpalbhaskar010

    Anytime bro! Synopsis plays a vital role. Keep it as interesting as you can. ✨

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    Welcome To Terminus
    Games · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds. The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor. Overall, it was a nice read. Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work. Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed. Keep up the good work!! This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.

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    Welcome To Terminus
    Games · Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Kandpalbhaskar010

    Hey, thanks a lot. It's based on ghosts only. You'll have to read more to understand the plot.

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    This is good. The writing quality is great. I can't say much about it since it only has 4 chapters. But, those 4 chapters are good enough to keep you hooked. I did find some tense problems in the first chapter. Other than that, it's going smooth for now. Keep it up!!

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    Voyage of the Villainess
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Aeipathy_02

    Yes! But, I actually prefer them outside the quotations. It's okay that way too right?

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Aeipathy_02

    I fixed it! 🙌

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to TrixiaBlade

    Thanks a lot! 🤗

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Aeipathy_02

    Thanks a lot!! 🙌 Yes! Those were initial chapters and I didn't cross-check them using Grammarly. That is the reason why there might be just a few errors. Now, I have started using Grammarly for proofreading. I'll do my best. Keep supporting!!

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    The author sure knows how to write. You got a great style of writing. I liked it. Genevieve's character is interesting. Although I did find few errors here and there, I'm assuming they'll be fixed after proofreading. So, 5 stars for you author because of this interesting plot. I would have given 4.8 because of those errors. But, they are minor ones that can be fixed right away. Lastly, as a suggestion, I'll say ~ Try to break down the long paragraphs. P.S ~ Keep up the good work!!

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    Forsaken's Redemption
    Sci-fi · ariam_N_M
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    At first, I thought it was related to some kind of vampire stuff and all. Then, later I came to know that it isn't. The work is based on Greek mythology. I used to love this concept. But, I have read so many novels that it has become a normal plot setting for me. Still, the author tried to bring the change by introducing Luna and her involvement with God. So, I can appreciate that. The writing quality is decent and very understandable. I did find many errors in the prologue. But, the synopsis says ~ it's going under a huge revision so I'll overlook that for now. Story development was good too. I liked the characters so far. The world is vast and that is why I think the pacing is slow, which I understand. To show such a vast world, it will require a lot of words to make your readers fully immerse into the chapters and your world. Overall, it was a good read and I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!!

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    Into the abyss
    Fantasy · Luzparadise_
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Posted

    Girl! Why you have to do me like that? Summer was killed? Abducted? I'm getting those vibes. Whenever any story involves the kidnapping of any girl and then they go missing. This hurts me most. 😢 The writing quality is good and the scenes have a great sequence. I did find few errors but they can be fixed while proofreading. Overall, I enjoyed it a lot and it made me pretty sad too. This is going to my library. Keep it up, dear author!!

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    The Scars She Left Behind
    Realistic · Autumn_Equinox
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Mayemura

    Hey there! Thanks a lot!! Yes!! this is my first novel. Thanks for reading my work!! ☺️🙌

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to ariam_N_M

    Hey! Thanks a lot dear! Keep supporting!!

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f2yr
    Replied to Luzparadise_

    No bro haha~ This work contains intense horror and not to be executed activities. Since, this is in its initial stage, the theme is light hearted for now. Eventually, it will get intense. And, also there are ghosts in this. You can go through tags for more info.

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    Ghost Busters
    Urban · Lonewo1f
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