Reviews of Fleur-de-Lis
Fleur-de-Lis
heyimliane
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Hi guys, Author here! I am going to shamelessly give my novel a 5 star lol. But I’m not here to just do that. I want to inform all the Kofies or readers that I might not give new update for a while because my novel will undergo editing, it may be a major editing so some words, grammar, description and details will change but of course, the plot will never ever change or be replaced. The editing may take few weeks but I assure you, I will do my best to make my novel even better. Have a nice day/afternoon/night everyone!! Also... Thank you for 6K in just a month! I love you all!! 🥺
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I don't really read romance but... I don't understand! The first chapter made me feel all giddy and ****! The next thing I knew I kept reading till the end. It's interesting alright. I'll give you that. The story flows well and this type of first person narration makes it soft for my eyes. Just hope there were more chapters TT
This story definitely has some chills and suspense building up slowly. At some points, you think you know who the unknown yandere killer is, and then the next everything changes on you and you're not sure. I can't wait until the eventual reveal of who the killer is and how she's going to be free from them. Loved this and can't wait for more!
This one has a good start. It surely baited me with that first chapter. As an anime fan, who happens to have a taste for shoujo genre, i found the story quite interesting. Author has good grasp of grammar, however, I can't help but notice the repetitions of words used in the storytelling. What I mean is, the character expressions and adjectives used to describe it are quite generic. This isn't a bad thing, but I think I'll have a better reading experience when the vocabulary of a book is immense. Please don't be discouraged on this, coz your work is really good. This is something you can improve on. Kudos!
This is my first time reading a "stalker" novel since I don't read much thriller. I can say that you've really hooked me with your first few chapters, the length of the story is just right and I can't seem to stop reading. A few things I'd like to point out is your description, I feel that if you could enhance your writing to be more descriptive, it would bring much more thrill and the readers can feel your characters even more. There are also a bit of grammatical errors so it would be better if you'll go back to your chapters and edit a little bit here and there. Besides those points, you've put up an intriguing story so keep up the good work.
The story is very interesting and very intriguing, the writing was great and the character development is very good, the writer was able to make the characters alive and not flat. But the way how the story unfolds is sometimes felt a little easy to predict, So im suggesting on making more plot twist , mysteries and some unique and special story events that will greatly affect the characters development. Thats all, overall this book has a great story that I will surely recommend to my friends
I actually binge read all the chapters and when I saw to be continued I was like Why?? Well, the whole plot is amazing I'm loving your book so far. One thing I would like to add is if you could add some descriptive paragraphs in your chapters. Like, you never told the readers how the school looks like or how the house or room of Fleur looks like. It would make readers visualize the things and I think that is the most important thing in a novel. Over all you book is just amazing ;)
So here's my review about this story First off, it has a really good story line. Although the first chapter isn't that really catchy, as you go on, it gets more and more interesting, Trust me. Next, Writing quality is good. It has minimal grammatical errors which are all completely fine. But as the author said, it will be edited in the future. Description of scenes is also thumbs up 👍 I love how the author describes those gory scenes in this book and the choice of words are just right. Development of Story and Characters is okay. This book is just starting, in the future chapters for sure, we will get to know the characters well. All in all this is a very good read for me. It has a very unique vibe and i like that. Well, as you all know, there are a lot of books out there with the same genre as this making everything almost the same, but for me this gave off a different vibe. Hope you guys like it as well 💗 Keep up the good work! I will be looking forward for more 💗
Oof, I may be biased since I 100% support fellow filipino authors, but in all honesty I like the story so far! Narration is great, but the sentences could use abit more of revisions so that the story can be more descriptive, but all-in-all i love the story so far. This story is interesting indeed, recognize it PEOPLE!!💕 More updates please, author!!💕
