He has help. His name is Garrett

This story has a similar premise to how we've seen before of VRMMOs and the journey of a hero through it. There's enough of a mystery there to keep you reading while also making the world of the VRMMO interesting enough that you want to learn more. The characters have plenty of room to grow, which is good for a story. Can't wait to see more as it comes out.

This story has a cute premise and an interesting, yet comically naive MC. He definitely gives off the sheltered and closed-off life that he's had to live, which is a solid dichotomy against Adrian and the rest of his classmates. Though, he does feel a bit too naive at times, but in a weirdly charming way. Can't wait to see more of what's to come

This story definitely has some chills and suspense building up slowly. At some points, you think you know who the unknown yandere killer is, and then the next everything changes on you and you're not sure. I can't wait until the eventual reveal of who the killer is and how she's going to be free from them. Loved this and can't wait for more!

Not quite sure you need an entire repeat of the flashback

I really like this story and how it's coming along. The world that it has built has a lot of potential and is decently fleshing out the characters through well-written dialogue and character traits that are subtle to pick out. The plot is intriguing and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

I like the premise of this story and I really can't wait to see where it goes from here. I'm excited for what's to come in the future. I can say that NEVER is something you should DEFINITELY read

This story has great potential for where it could go. It was a genuine surprise to me that Alexander Smith was real, and almost makes me wonder if there was some magical event or influence that made the girls' lie real. This story is good, though definitely grammar errors littered about, and I'm excited to see more

This story is absolutely great. The world that has built up over these chapters has a lot of potential for storytelling and interesting plot points. I love the characters and the way that the MC is thrown into everything, really hitting hard that this is a fantasy world and not the human world. An absolutely great piece that I highly recommend reading, and I'm excited for more to come out.

Thee are plenty more chapters coming down the pipeline, that bring more characterization and world development. After all, a good story doesn't play all its cards upfront. Stay tuned for future chapters, and hopefully I manage to scratch that character development itch

This story does a good job of suddenly throwing Shio into this world of chaos, along with the reader as well. There's that gnawing curiosity of what happens next and how everything in this mysterious world functions, and the creatures that inhabit it. There were typos that I noticed often going through, not to mention a repetition of the phrase "Character said with a (BLANK) tone." It definitely needed some switching up, which I am glad to see got changed up in the later chapters, but still was present.

This story had some good potential. I'm interested to see how Ben works his way out of his situation, but I'm more interested in how the Pick Up Artist System works and the mechanisms and everything behind it. Can't wait for more to come out.