Reviews of Enchantress Amongst Alchemist:Ghost King's Wife
Enchantress Amongst Alchemist:Ghost King's Wife
Wens_Taba6
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It was enjoyable to read. Grammar needs work but points got across well. I do not know much about writing when it comes to identify when a character is talking but I would suggest looking up ways to clarify it. Names are similar. I would often get confused as to who said what.
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I quite like this story so far, however it is very difficult to read due to lack of correct punctuation. When a character is speaking, their words should appear in quotation marks, otherwise it is confusing to figure out when something is something stated as a fact of the world or something being said or thought by a character. Also, when someone possesses something, you must say that βthatβs theirsβ not βthats theirsβ otherwise it doesnβt make sense. I believe this is a very good start and I hope to read more, however I hope the author does some editing on the chapters that are already out ask the author to be more meticulous when writing more chapters in the future. β€οΈ
Story is similar to Prodigiously Amazing Weaponsmith. The only difference is that the FL on this story is an alchemist while the latter is an arnament master. Both are reincarnated souls of a thousand year old couple. The start of the plot was good and I got hooked. But when the rival of the FL keeps on reincarnating after being defeated by FL, it got so boring. The rival just preserves her sould and finds another body to inhabit and then chases after the ML again. The story foundation is good but it lack unique ideas to keep the story going. The succeeding arcs became nonsensical and repetitive. Btw i reach chap 300 out of 1200 chap on another platforms. But then eventually dropped it midway.
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