Review Detail of EmpressChloe in Enchantress Amongst Alchemist:Ghost King's Wife
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I quite like this story so far, however it is very difficult to read due to lack of correct punctuation. When a character is speaking, their words should appear in quotation marks, otherwise it is confusing to figure out when something is something stated as a fact of the world or something being said or thought by a character. Also, when someone possesses something, you must say that “that’s theirs” not “thats theirs” otherwise it doesn’t make sense. I believe this is a very good start and I hope to read more, however I hope the author does some editing on the chapters that are already out ask the author to be more meticulous when writing more chapters in the future. ❤️
Enchantress Amongst Alchemist:Ghost King's Wife
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Well, if you wanna read more, that's easy : this story isn't an original but from a Chinese web novel. It ended with 1568 chapters and right now, more than 1200 of them are already translated on a website named Radiant translation. You're in to a quite the long story, so good luck 😉👍! However, I don't know whether the "author" made the translation by himself or if he copied it, but I think it's quite disappointing to not give credits at least to the original author. Furthermore, if he didn't translate the story by himself, as the original translated story in english is all completely free to read in the internet and so as nothing can stop us from reading it there, I think we should respect the translator by reading it from his own website.