The story itself is fantastic and well thought out, but I simply can’t bring myself to continue reading it as the grammar is so poor. The author switches between past and present tense indiscriminately with zero regard for when things are happening. The author is also inconsistent with gender and often gets he and she confused making it hard to tell who is speaking when. If this story gets edited into proper English I would love to continue reading it, as the plot is solid and the characters are well thought out, but for now I will stop at chapter 33 as I simply can’t read more.