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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
If I ever decide to venture into the system cultivation /transmigration genre, this would certainly be an example to go by. Unlike other system books where everything is so fast/spontaneous, this one lets us journey along with MC in the perfect pace. World background is unique and I enjoy the pace of character development and how the story develops in general. Congratulations to you, author. You did good by it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Great, this is a great novel. A truly descriptive world background with a good pacing, However, the character design is what is commendable, I liked how you described your MC so well to let the reader emphasize with his situation. For any readers that like the system and RPG theme this could be truly a great option. Great Job, author!
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
The first part is literally beautiful and interesting. The descriptive writing is superb! The title is already interesting and then you read the story then it becomes much more interesting. No joke! I'll this in my library and read it for it is written by such a great fellow Filipino author of mine. Keep writing!