This is pretty great :) It seems like the script to a manga or an anime, which on its own is pretty dang cool. Give it a read, and see for yourself!
Beautiful! The language here is great. This is easily one of the best written works I've seen on this website. Give it a try, and see for yourself what I mean!
I'll admit, I have a thing for nicely written first-person stories! This is one such novel, and so far, it hits all the marks. Great and elaborate language, memorable characters... I want more!
Very nice and refreshing, really! This is a unique story, and I'll be following it for sure :) Lots of difficult words and names, but all done with great control, so that it makes sense!
A really likable story, with an interesting beginning. One of the best things is the dialogue - it just flows so naturally! Will be keeping an eye on this one :)
The writing is very detailed and poetic. Minor details with grammar aside, this is very interesting! Definitely give it a chance, people! I'm gonna keep an eye on this one :)
Interesting story! Minor details with the writing in general, but overall very good. The title definitely works for drawing in people interested in game worlds, classes and such :) Good luck with the competition!
So humble! I like it :)