Niggross
The author is for the most part a liar. 80% of the novel is useless information that can be found on any search resource like Google ... The novel for the most part consists of useless actions, explanations, conversations in several chapters in the same period of time. Another disadvantage is that the author does not interact with readers, he does not care about our opinion. The only pluses are that the characters seem alive and a quick update, but that’s all. Did I mention that the author is a liar? In the arc of dark souls, the author said that he himself wants to finish the world of dark souls faster, but he still stretched into 40+ chapters, I am talking about this deceit. The next world, he promised short or after dark souls to continue the Witcher, but Harry Potter, which has more than 100+ chapters. I can’t put up with this anymore, and most likely many readers, frustrated by the author, have stopped reading this, just like me.
Bro i really liked the story at least the witcher ark after that things kinda went downhill. I remember you Saying that he would only be going to other worlds to learn their powers and then would ultimately return to the witcher. Now I don't care if you never return to the witcher world but at the very least he should've gone off into a different world by now. If you just wanted to make a dark souls fanfic then that honestly would've been better than trying to mishmash all these different worlds and powers.because you added all the other stuff it just brings down the quality of the dark souls fanfic(Im gonna call it that because thats obviously what your really favouring, come on bro 200+ plus chapters and over 150 are dark souls that IS getting repetitive)that you really wanted and not getting so much flap from other people because then only people who actually wanted to enjoy a DS fanfic would read it
700 chapter dropped NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR Alerttttttttttttttttttttt Don't read if you don't like NTR as MC has NTR fetish and its awaken after chapter 700 something ......So you all gonna hate the story and Author cause I wasted so much time on this shitty story. .. I swear i loved this story before chapter 700 and i was loyal fan but Author has introduce shit .. .. .fck U author. .you write such a great storyline then why do you have to fck up his love life .....😩😩😩😩
This story sounded incredible and started off amazing. Unfortunately the story decided to spend more than 100 chapters in a different world. I get that you want your character to get stronger but the witcher has a ton of lore that you easily could have used. Just my opinion, overall still a decent story.
I HATE DARK SOULS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Why is over 80% of the novel about the ****ty Dark Souls Universe??? We want the fucking adventure through other worlds, not reading how you advance through the Dark Souls games. If we wanted to know that we would pick up the Manual or watch the Walkthrough on the youtube, afterall there wouldn't be that much difference compared to what you write.
So, I have a problem actually giving a fitting review for this fic, the first few hundreds of chapters are actually great, the MC goes around with a strong will, basically jumping from one adventure to another one and making good friends, though simple I’m pretty fine with that 👍 I enjoyed the absolver and Dark souls arcs even though I know nothing of the games myself The problems start appearing when the MC reaches the HP world as he is already crushingly stronger than anyone can possibly be in that world, which takes a lot from the suspense and the tension, however as a Harry Potter fan I still enjoyed reading it. Then the MC goes back to the Witcher and it starts pretty well with a big battle After that we still have a few good chapters but the story slowly starts to get less captivating as the MC only keeps getting stronger wihout actually needing much of that strength at all The big problem however, and this is a big spoiler - in case you still wanted to read the story - is that out of nowhere, one of the girls who could have been the love interest of the MC earlier on (Quelaag) decides that she will form a love triangle with the MC and Ciri, even though the MC never actually showed more than brotherly feelings towards her. to do that she actually gives a love potion to Ciri effectively r*ping her since she has no say in the matter. Even though I was pretty horrified with the development it could have been fine if when learning about it the MC - who had been ruthless to a totally excessive point against anyone bettaying him so far - actually gets a b*ner when he catches Quelaag, and goes on saying that he doesn’t know what to do, which makes no sense. Your love was raped in front of you by someone you held dear, that should be the worst betrayal and she should definitely have been punished but NO... That got me to drop the story after reading 50 more chapters hoping that she would be punished without ever seeing anything done
I read from the very first chapter when this fanfic just appeared. I thought the fan fiction about the Witcher, great, but he's not about the Witcher at all. I hoped that the author would be corrected and first end with the Witcher world, but no, he just goes to useless worlds and describes each action, I am surprised that the author did not describe the beach episodes of 10 chapters. But I can’t stand it anymore, there are too many cliffs and useless actions.