it's so hard to find a novel with good grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just think it needs a editor or the person who put it up to reread it and correct some things and some things are stupid and others make no sense

It's not bad, some things are not as good as i thought it would be but altogether it's not half bad. It does needs someone to proofread though and change some things but besides that its pretty good.

it's a pretty good book it could have been a little better but so far not bad.... .......................................................................

it needs the auther to reread and edit it...................................................................... .......................................

it was way bad before 700 chapters already

It's not bad at the beginning but it turns into trash in the middle................... ................................................................

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I don't understand this part, there is bad grammar in this entire thing!

Great story, just needs a little better grammar........................................................ ...............................................................

i think 4 becouse he already is op in a every other part but still doesnt have a really good tracking ability

It's not a bad idea, you should get a editor......................................................... ........................................................................................

it's really good so far can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it's good there are some things that are not that good but most things are really well implemented..............................................................................................

I like it becouse he doesn't have cheats!..................................... ............................................................................................

really good so far hope for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this made my day!!!

this is good for laughs

its really good at the beginning but he is way op after the witcher..................................................................................

did anyone else notice the french and the russians speak with the same accent