Review Detail of ApathyPotato in Elder Blood Witcher
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The author is for the most part a liar. 80% of the novel is useless information that can be found on any search resource like Google ... The novel for the most part consists of useless actions, explanations, conversations in several chapters in the same period of time. Another disadvantage is that the author does not interact with readers, he does not care about our opinion. The only pluses are that the characters seem alive and a quick update, but that’s all. Did I mention that the author is a liar? In the arc of dark souls, the author said that he himself wants to finish the world of dark souls faster, but he still stretched into 40+ chapters, I am talking about this deceit. The next world, he promised short or after dark souls to continue the Witcher, but Harry Potter, which has more than 100+ chapters. I can’t put up with this anymore, and most likely many readers, frustrated by the author, have stopped reading this, just like me.
Elder Blood Witcher
Niggross
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Sorry if you feel that way, I try to incorporate everything I need to for the story to progress and I admit sometimes I get bogged down in inconsequential details and character interactions but I think I'd personally prefer something too long that provides too much information than the opposite.. I'd like to think I'm developing as a writer (you can refer to my previous book for proof of that) so maybe in my next book you'll find something of value. As always, thanks for the critique and reading up until now.
I really like your romance. But the speed of development is very slow and I do not want to read. Everything happens extremely slowly. If at the beginning your novel was an active form of the novel, then after the Witcher chapters it turned into a genre of everyday life where there is very little of something really important for the plot. I don’t know if you know about such a novel as Lazy God and Playing with souls in another world, these two novels also turned into a genre of everyday life, well, at least Lazy god, and Playing with souls in another world seems to have established itself as a genre from the beginning everyday life with an extremely slow development of the plot. Well, good luck, if you write another book in the future, I hope the development there will be faster. Most likely I’ll return to reading your novel when Reima finally leaves the world of Harry Potter and returns to the world of The Witcher, I will skip the chapters of Harry and start reading right away from The Witcher. I admit, I do not like the world of Harry Potter due to the fact that every author is trying to add Harry Potter and I’m tired of it already, if it was a different world, for example World of Warcraft, then I would be happy and wrote thanks under each chapter. Good luck again.
Niggross:Sorry if you feel that way, I try to incorporate everything I need to for the story to progress and I admit sometimes I get bogged down in inconsequential details and character interactions but I think I'd personally prefer something too long that provides too much information than the opposite.. I'd like to think I'm developing as a writer (you can refer to my previous book for proof of that) so maybe in my next book you'll find something of value. As always, thanks for the critique and reading up until now.
ApathyPotato:I really like your romance. But the speed of development is very slow and I do not want to read. Everything happens extremely slowly. If at the beginning your novel was an active form of the novel, then after the Witcher chapters it turned into a genre of everyday life where there is very little of something really important for the plot. I don’t know if you know about such a novel as Lazy God and Playing with souls in another world, these two novels also turned into a genre of everyday life, well, at least Lazy god, and Playing with souls in another world seems to have established itself as a genre from the beginning everyday life with an extremely slow development of the plot. Well, good luck, if you write another book in the future, I hope the development there will be faster. Most likely I’ll return to reading your novel when Reima finally leaves the world of Harry Potter and returns to the world of The Witcher, I will skip the chapters of Harry and start reading right away from The Witcher. I admit, I do not like the world of Harry Potter due to the fact that every author is trying to add Harry Potter and I’m tired of it already, if it was a different world, for example World of Warcraft, then I would be happy and wrote thanks under each chapter. Good luck again.