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Well, my turn. I have just started and have read 4 chapters so far, so I’m not far in yet, but! The language that is being used, how simple yet very rich it is, with many synonyms to replace a word so to not repeat it is what is so enthralling. It really makes a difference, very, very easy to read and brings imagination to life way faster, so you just want to keep swiping to the next chapter. Beautiful grammar, powerful language. I will repeat myself — very concise, without extra unnecessary explanation for this and that, which is so important when you’re trying to get the message and not bore the reader. I’ve confidently added this to my Library as I’m am CONFIDENT I will read and enjoy it. Thanks to the author for bringing their imagination to life and sharing with us 💖🤗
‘The Breakup’, ‘The New Entry’, it all seems that Jun Men is in for many ups and downs, adventures both welcomed and unwelcome. So far, I am enjoying everything about the story. It is unfolding at a good pace and keeping me engaged. I am really liking the writing style, short sentences just succinct in a very Hemingway method. Looking forward to reading it more. Keep it up!!
This book is among the better quality ones, with good grammar and flow of the story. I'm not familiar with werewolves novels, so can't say for sure if it's different or unique compared to others. But what caught my attention the most is the MC's character. I mistook her for a man at first 🤣That aside, she's very level-headed, scarily so. Her moods are very consistent throughout the chapters. A bit cold/tsunderish, might I say? She knows what she wants, and is not afraid to make the first step. Another plus point is ML's character. He's sweet and caring to his surroundings, yet undeniably ruthless and cruel towards his enemies. Both carry a sad past and are creating a very healthy relationship together. Which is rare in nowadays novels that are overflowing with toxicity...ehm...speaks the one who likes to write about toxic couples. 🤣🙏 Sometimes I felt they rushed it a bit too much, and missed a few build-ups, for example, scenes that would make me go, yes! I ship them so much! They are made for each other! 😂 Except for that little complaint, the fighting scenes are superb, not overly long, yet descriptive enough to imagine the scene clearly. The author gradually reveals the background of the world, and it's sure an interesting one, packed with mystery and adventure. This book definitely has potential, so do not give up on writing. 😁
What an amazing book to begin with. I must commend your writing skills are good. The flow is great. You are bringing out the different type of people in your book before going deeper. It gives us a headstart on what to expect. At first I did not understand whether the Lead was male or female. Keep up the good work
First of all I want to say that your writing is really good. It was easy to imagine the scenes after I slapped in the image of a Chinese manhua panel. You did very well in describing the character though the name was a little hard to tell whether the MC was a boy or girl in the beginning for me. There were some parts where the text was so heavy and I was like wow! So, this is just a small reminder to leave some breathing room for readers as well. Overall, the story has lots of potential and I look forward to further chapters! Good luck! Keep writing dear Author!
I think this story is unique in its way. especially the way the author demonstrates his writing capability. the world setting and the character are great. I feel that the more in-depth I go, the more everything unfolds. my only complaint is the many characters and their difficult names. although I am not a reader that concentrates on an MC; however, the book (at least) for now is revolving a little around the Mc. but it's great too.