Review Detail of Nicole_99 in Double Moon

First of all I want to say that your writing is really good. It was easy to imagine the scenes after I slapped in the image of a Chinese manhua panel. You did very well in describing the character though the name was a little hard to tell whether the MC was a boy or girl in the beginning for me. There were some parts where the text was so heavy and I was like wow! So, this is just a small reminder to leave some breathing room for readers as well. Overall, the story has lots of potential and I look forward to further chapters! Good luck! Keep writing dear Author!