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NAF121yrReplied to Yama_KameThis may be really late, but hey, here we are. To you too, man. Cheers!
Journeying Through the Dungeon- NAF121yrReplied to Yama_KameCh 3 So... I'm an Automaton now...
- NAF121yrReplied to Yama_KameCh 2 Where am I?
- NAF121yrReplied to THE_mine_play
Hi there! Thanks for the suggestion, I really appreciate it. The reason I put the background of the MC in the prologue was to build who the MC is and what he can do so that he's not pulling out deus ex-machina sort of thing, if you know what I mean. I will take better consideration in building characters next time. Thank you for reading IANATRI.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NAF121yrReplied to Finadable2leader
Hi there! His attitude of being confused and scared so much can be a pain to read. The MC during this very early point of the story is still being denial about what he has become. Thank you again for your thoughts on my story. I really appreciate it! Cheers, mate.
Ch 2 Where am I? - NAF121yrReplied to Finadable2leader
Hello there! I appreciate your input. Regarding that however, in this early point of the story, the MC is still confused of his situation and can barely accept what he is (still believing he's a human, not a machine) at the moment.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NAF121yrReplied to NLinCH
Hello there! Thank you for giving your thoughts for my work. Okay, we're touching a bit of sensitive topic. For this case, yeah, he's not particularly atheist. He's just a guy who's not too religious. Or... maybe the term "not too religious" isn't the right word? I'd love to hear your opinion if you have any. Anyway, thanks again. Cheers!
I realized I was on top of a hill. The scent of the air was fresh as the day was still morning. And the sound of wind blowing over the tall grass on the valley made it a heavenly bliss. I could just sit down on a rock or even the dirt and gaze upon this impressive creation of God for hours. - NAF121yrReplied to DesertBerry
Poor Faruk is suffering horrors... because of something. That totally overthrows his sensible side, lol. . Thanks for reading!
"(Puh... that little twerp... where did she go? I hope she's not heading left... that path is full of monsters. I can't sense her presence in this Observer form... darn it, she didn't know about this split path, yet! I don't see her on that left passage, so she must've headed to the right!)" - NAF121yrReplied to DesertBerry
Oooh, nice information! Guess my research needs more improvement, eh.
"I remember I breathed through my mouth if I want to avoid smelling something nasty like this. A-Ah, but don't worry, I'll try to get used to the smell with my nose, too!" - NAF121yrReplied to DesertBerry
Oh, cool! Didn't expect it collides with a chemistry, lol.
"E-404? What's that?" Oria asked back. - NAF121yrReplied to DesertBerry
lol
"Master Dux... we are so high above the ground, aren't we?" she asked while not batting an eye to him. - NAF121yrReplied to DesertBerry
*A-Ahem* Guess my engineer background affected my writing, eh? But hey, thank you for the feedback!
"Display Self Status!" - NAF121yrReplied to Rita_152
Well, literally, that's the gist of it, haha. Thanks for reading!
"Though, I'm curious, Oria. What's this E-404 means?" Dux ultimately asked. - NAF123yrReplied to soulla