Rightomate
The grammar is amazing, the story is extremely interesting and even with popular demand of people probably going to want a evil or emotionless MC, this does not do that. This is definitely one of the best novels I have read and I recommend it to anyone. Keep up the good work author and do not drop please.
You can skip first 3 chapters. They don't add anything to the story later. The story, at least for me, became unenjoyable when comedy started to overtake the story. As in making plot less relevant than comedy. I am writing this after reading Chapter 14. It might change, it might not, but I will still not read any further.
Written at chapter 25. This is one of the best ff at their well written and interesting story. The main character is well written, his so far story is great. This story has two problems which are bad spacing between events and short chapters but other that I would recommend this to every to give a try.
Honestly couldn’t get over the unnecessarily weird start you gave and feel like it’s going to play a part later in the story which I don’t like. Also frankly his entry into the world was unnecessarily grim and I feel like that’s you setting the tone for the story which is macabre. To reiterate I am not the kind of reader who can appreciate that. Otherwise interesting premise.