Because you don't know anything about your own character. One thing I'm sure of is that I'm a better reviewer of novels than you. Is this a big talk, you can be sure these are not big talks. And you are someone who doesn't take constructive criticism. According to my review, you don't know the main character of the novel you wrote, this is How arrogant hahaha. I wish life out there was like this. I'm talking big because I'm not a professional reviewer, but I believe there are fewer reviewers better than me on this site. You went to a restaurant and had dinner, you told the cook that the food was bad, and the cook told you to make the food yourself if you didn't like it.

The skills and abilities he has should have changed long ago with everything else. Writer, you don't understand, he is not a human. With everything he does and I don't understand why MC's mental development is slow. The worlds he went to, the years he stayed there, the lives he observed. Writer, you are just talking nonsense.

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mtl novels.Google it and search, you will understand what I mean.

When MC becomes omnipotent, continue the novel, if you can't, finish it. Just don't make the novel an MTL novel.

Author, you ruined the novel. After chapter 27, it's complete nonsense.

MC's character development doesn't work like this. MC isn't even supposed to have emotions. He should just be someone who does everything for his goals. He's like someone who got rid of all his weaknesses. You don't even know the character you wrote. MC is like a 16-year-old teenager. But MC has millions of years of memories, he is a different person than he should be with the memories, experiences and skills he receives from the souls.

Author, you're talking nonsense really well. MC's character development doesn't work like this. MC's shouldn't even have emotions. He should just be someone who does everything for his goals. He's like someone who gets rid of all his weaknesses. You don't even know the character you wrote.

That's why I won't read this novel again. I don't have that much free time.

With the years he lived, the memories, the experiences. I don't think he will do these. But I remembered something I forgot, this is just a fanfic. So the writer writes what he wants.

I said it not about this episode, but by including what I saw from the previous episodes. If you do MC as I said, that's great.

For someone with power like MC, these last 3 episodes are just nonsense. With the abilities he has and the memories he has, it should be impossible for him to act like this. If there is character development in the novel, MC shouldn't be like this. Everything he does in the last 3 episodes should be meaningless for him.

He has lived so many lives. He should not act like a young person. He should act like someone who is knowledgeable, manipulative, and does not act with his emotions. MC should be like Fang Yuan. MC should act with logic, be ruthless. This is what he should be after so many lives.

Author, don't make us wait too long for new chapters. Your novel is good.

When MC is done with him, he can look at his jutsu and all his life knowledge by reading his memories. Memories of valuable opponents must be important for MC.

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Why doesn't it absorb the entire planet? Isn't this a waste of time?

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