Reviews of Dimensional Immortal

The grammar is top notch with almost zero problems there are a few sign errors where there should be a comma but aren't. Other than that it is bloody brilliant.

Want to see a psychopath? Seeing the crazy deeds he could do and how he could manipulate all of a universe to serve those interests, know you are oh right place. But I warn you the vibe of this novel is very, very heavy and dark so if you want a dark story hurry to start reading this novel.

The immersive story had me engaged the entire read. It was intense, powerful, and had me craving more with every page. Definitely one of my favorite fan fictions and can't wait for more!

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Pure disappointment. First 5 chapters were good unfortunately, the rest is mediocre. Typical Mc mistakes and stupid decisions and all. .......................................................................

I'd be concerned if the author of their own story didn't rate it five stars. Hope everyone who reads enjoys it I work hard to post at least once or twice a week so expect it.

You know you already loved the Novel the Moment Evil Mc was in the sypnosis ;) so.....just read it bro ;) Get yourself some popcorn and enjoy the Show

My English not so great so I wouldn't try to write some big essay. The novel is great, it have its own problems and forced moments, but it's still enjoyable work. I would discuss only problematic side, but that's doesn't mean that novel is bad. It's just mean I'm a nasty аssholes that trying to make this review quick. Mc is already started as psyhopat. And that's a huge turn off for most new readers and for me too. Because with how his DC journey go, him starting in a Grey line could be far more satisfying. Because it's would be great character development. And forced moments would be less idiotic. Let's be honest, with how much he is wishing for power and being paranoid, he never trained in his new life? Come on, that's against his character. And it's wouldn't mean much in the end. Slow gaining of strength, yeah I could totally understand it and appreciate it. Because that's a cornerstone that makes power- fantasy stories much more enjoyable, but for a fact. Gaining strength in DC shouldn't take be so hard, the world literally giving it as a hot cakes. But that's not so important. P. S. I loved his creepy conversation with Kara, my God, he sounds like a best yandere out there. Would like to see there harem, where mc manipulate and mold girls for his need. I think it's would be great. Something like dark wolf shiro works, but with less convenient story and more dark. 🙏🙏🙏