Like wayyyy too many

Great chapter… I wish we could get some more progression though

Well written for sure. Unfortunately from what I’ve read so far it does not take place in the pokemon world. Just leaving this in case someone is wondering about that.

So lame that he is using the booster gear. It’s honestly so over used.

You should not post pat/reon exclusive content here. Asking for some dough for extra chapters and all that jazz is cool but a pay wall is certainly not. If this is what you want to do, then WebNovel isn’t the right place for you to post your work.

Keeping him a human would have been more apt for the story and the background you gave him.

Well I really liked it and how gritty it was, especially the part about him being the first human to get where he got. Then you go and make him a non human. I get why you did it, but because of that I now find it uninteresting to read. The premise was great up until the dan machi part. I really wish you just had him strengthen his body without all the animal feature stuff. It would have been cool to see him still as a human survivor.

If I could give less stars I would. This shouldn’t even be on this site. Don’t throw exclusive paid content on here. I car barely tolerate all of those XsomethingX accounts that spam us with their pat reon stuff but at least they offer 10 chapters or so before they start with thier BS. If you want to promote a paid novel do it somewhere else unless you are also dropping it here for free. Haven’t you notice how everyone else does the pat reon stuff?

Yeah that seemed uncalled for. He just escalated that like crazy. Apathy is one thing but aggression is a completely different animal.

It’d be nice to finally get some back story for him. It’s very enjoyable, but I feel like everything is way too mysterious at times.

I like it. I’m just very confused now. I don’t think he needs a dark backstory to be honest. His powers he has are enough and it’s been a good ride so far exploring them. Whatever transformation and whatnot he can do really becomes a side piece because as the title says, this is supposed to be about an artificer. If that ceases to be the focus, then I would change the title. Anyways nice chapter thanks for your hard work.

What happened to the grammar in this chapter?

I personally at least think the increase to his mental skill would help out his class and his processing speed.

Then just stop giving them to him. Unless you plan on using them eventually, they become superfluous details for the story and take away from the whole experience. It’s great otherwise so far. There are certainly some things you can tighten up, like the stat point stuff, but overall a great read so far.

Wait really? Then what is the reason for points

I hope because this foreshadowing is getting old quick. Great book otherwise.

This is absolutely amazing. I love how we are learning more about who he is and who he may be.

I’m kind of sick of wondering about this Brine dude. Are they also a system holder? This particular Pokémon world is crazy enough without another system holder around to make a mess of it… it just breaks the whole immersion aspect.

And Shedinja too

This bird is like Naruto and cool jutsu lol