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My English not so great so I wouldn't try to write some big essay. The novel is great, it have its own problems and forced moments, but it's still enjoyable work. I would discuss only problematic side, but that's doesn't mean that novel is bad. It's just mean I'm a nasty аssholes that trying to make this review quick. Mc is already started as psyhopat. And that's a huge turn off for most new readers and for me too. Because with how his DC journey go, him starting in a Grey line could be far more satisfying. Because it's would be great character development. And forced moments would be less idiotic. Let's be honest, with how much he is wishing for power and being paranoid, he never trained in his new life? Come on, that's against his character. And it's wouldn't mean much in the end. Slow gaining of strength, yeah I could totally understand it and appreciate it. Because that's a cornerstone that makes power- fantasy stories much more enjoyable, but for a fact. Gaining strength in DC shouldn't take be so hard, the world literally giving it as a hot cakes. But that's not so important. P. S. I loved his creepy conversation with Kara, my God, he sounds like a best yandere out there. Would like to see there harem, where mc manipulate and mold girls for his need. I think it's would be great. Something like dark wolf shiro works, but with less convenient story and more dark. 🙏🙏🙏

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Dark Wolf Shiro is literally my idol