What is it beyond death? A question that will never be answered until one meets with the death itself, isn't it? "You are a disappointment." "I'll always be by your side." "Have you gone mad!? You useless trash!" "Believe in yourself as I believe in you." Thousands of scenarios and dramas in his life, but he stood, as he walked one step at a time. He never feared going forward for the worst that could happen is his death. 'Perhaps.. I shouldn't have been born... ' A thought that always haunted his mind, for he thought he's unfit for this world. 'But.. I don't wanna die either..' And in his last moment, he heard a voice, a whisper that came into his head. "Do you?" ****** hai, I'm joining the spirity contest and this is my new story. if you like how the story so far, please give me your support by leaving a review or some power stones for me, thank you!
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Martin became an orphan when he lost his family in a mysterious accident at a young age. Although he was orphaned, it did not affect him because of the mental problems he had. When he grows up to a certain age, he joined the world of crime and began to improve himself.within 10 years he became one of the most dangerous serial-killers known in the dark world. He also started killing people for money. But he died of an explosion on his last mission. He also had a system to help him in this new world. A soulless and emotionless serial killer from the old world had to give life in a fantastic world. But what he didn't know is that the powers that were possessed in this world would change itself. - You can try another book of mine here , it newly started just check it out - https://www.webnovel.com/book/16727674105007605/The-Mind-God#review - https://www.instagram.com/krizantemauthor/ ( for questions), after 2k followers I will post daily 2 chapter to book
How would you feel living a life of absolute misery and pain? What would think when the sister of a girl you were falsely accused of killing breaks into your home and kills you by accident. Even the Gods are unsettled with what humanity has become, so what do they offer John? A: Reincarnation B: Power C: Revenge D: The choice to start apocalypses throughout the three universes. or E: All of the Above You know where this is going.
There is a programming error in the system called the world and a guy is a bug. God has volunteered to do experiments on him and after the successful experiment, he is reincarnated to a fantasy world filled with adventure, mystery, and magic. This is the story of a man who was reincarnated as a 15-year-old boy after a crazy experiment from God. A tale of how he restarted his life in the new world and how he became a Hero from Zero. Buy me a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/brpever Rules: 1) Usually, multiple chapters will be published every week. I will let you guys know if I am taking a break. 2) For every 300 powerstones, 1 extra chapter will be released during the weekend 3) I am willing to work on suggestions and comments from my readers. 4) The credit of cover picture goes to Aldnonymous and his friend Feni fenol which was released under Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported license on Wikimedia Commons and was modified by me (author). Discord: https://discord.gg/NChfKfz Note: This story is meant to be a fun isekai series. If you don't like such series or if you are looking for something too serious to read, this is probably not the one for you. You can try my other book 'Rising Against Fate' if you like a little more darker and serious type.
Brion was just a normal college student. Since childhood, he was interested in the abilities of "Mind Power" and "Mind", and although the people around him looked at him with the "crazy" eye, he continued to work on these abilities. But he never succeeded in his life and died as a result of a disease. When he woke up, he was in a cave and soon realized he had a system, and at the same time, he realized that he had come to a fantastic universe. And only the system tailored for his own "Mind" abilities and only belong to him. It was glory given to him to realize his dreams that he couldn't do in his previous world. - - https://www.instagram.com/krizantemauthor/ ( for questions), after 2k followers I will post daily 2 chapter to book
The past is the sea of the present, and it's the shrine of the future. No one knows that the master of chaos, the king of death, and the envoy of hell. Is sittings on a throne of skulls as he watching the world in a deadly silence .. No one knew at the time that the past, present and future are a maze of amazement and shocks. Do not lower your head while you read so you Don't hurt yourself. when the hero of the story is the villain that the world is afraid of, when will the clock stop and announce the beginning of the end
As blood rushed up his throat and leaked between his teeth, his sinister appearance aggravated to the point that he looked like demon. After his maniacal laugh, his punctured lungs finally gave out, causing his whole body to collapse on the ground, dyeing it a scarlet shade. His mind went blank, while his consciousness started leaving his battered body. *** After what appeared to be a few minutes, he suddenly woke up. He was startled at first, but realized that he had indeed died. He had no body and everything around him was black, without an ounce of life. It was an absolute void. ''So this is what happens when you die... You just drift in darkness... That's actually underwhelming... I wonder if I'll just fade away into nothingness'' When Derrick's thoughts were starting to drift, a prompt showed up in front of him. [Welcome Derrick Tarlin! This is System : Nemesis] [Would you like to take revenge? Yes/No]
Within less than a day of the Inquisitor’s arrival, Fen ends up bound to the stake. As he stares down at the face of the friend who sold him out, the stakes are lit as the execution begins. "I will burn you for this treason!" Those words resounded in Fen's mind as his body gave up, releasing his soul into the flames Only for it to be cleansed, and reborn from the fires! Now, the age of the dragon is over. It's time for the return of the Phoenix! Discord link: https://discord.gg/pJTVGZZ
In the World of Eldeon, whereas Magic and Magical beast exist. Kiro was summoned into this unknown realm with the help of the SYSTEM. He strived his way to overcome the tribulation of this new life. Follow him on the journey to this isekai-world. * * * Have some suggestions? Join my discord channel. https://discord.gg/mKypCxc *Disclaimer* I do not own the cover photo. *Source* Pinterest: Kel, Holy Marksman
Kaz can't help but be the butt of everyone's jokes. always being harassed and beaten by his classmates and neglected by his parents. Kaz had finally had enough. In a desperate fit of rage, he sought to change his world around but instead he found himself at death's door. only a voice to guide him to the afterlife. starting his new life as a Kobold in an unfamiliar world, Kaz must grow and become the Prince of Darkness to survive and become something more than himself. On the other hand, the Kobold Fritz is starting his new life in a human body and must come to understand what it means to be human. Will he find redemption in the human race or will he succumb to despair living Kaz's life? Will Kaz's hatred for humanity cause him to destroy the world or will he find something greater to achieve? find out in "A System for the Prince of Darkness." Updates Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays!
Darkness. The ultimate ruler, the true One-Above-All. Everything starts from it, and everything returns to it eventually. People say that in your final moments, darkness seeps in your very existence, engulfs your whole being. They say it’s an incredibly relaxing feeling that takes you on your journey to your afterlife. They say that in the very darkness, the ‘nothingness’ your weary soul will finally be able to rest and relax. This brings up some very philosophical and existential questions. Do you even exist? Follow the epic journey of Aiden, the last primal, a unique and ancient race as he finds his place in a strange, new world, filled with threats and violence. ----- If you would like to reach out to me, my discord tag is: Shaele#5221 Don't worry, I don't bite (too hard)! ----- This story (and the world itself) is something I started writing and creating 15 years ago, while I was telling stories with my friends in our regular D&D sessions. The world is a hand-crafted fantasy world, filled with history and lore that we created over the course of years. While I may be new to the writing scene, I will do my very best to bring you an enjoyable experience. UPDATE: The current schedule (from September 2020): 1 chapter EVERY DAY (between 1500-1700 words) One final note: I plan to write R-18 chapters later as well (the first one is planned to happen between chapter 170-190), but as you will see from the flow of the story, this is not feasible for the short term. While I have a sizable backlog pre-written, nothing besides the main story is set in stone, and I look forward to constructive criticism and feedback. Hope you enjoy the journey just as much as I enjoyed creating it. ----- The cover image is not my own creation, all credit goes to the author. It was listed under "Free to use with modification". I'm hoping that at some point I can replace it with one fan-made. :)
In the year 3650, humanity has conquered the universe, only to find out that they were the only intelligent species in existence. With the limit technology had reached, they yearned for more. More convenience and more life, so they started the project known as B.S. which was the process of breaking through the shackles that limited us while it also protected us from outside dangers. Right after 100 years, after the project B.S. had successfully been completed, monsters of terrifying strength intruded in their universe, resulting in a war that continued for a thousand years. After facing these monsters, something seemed to awaken within their body as they unlocked supernatural powers by absorbing the magical stone inside the monster's body. Dignity might have been important in the mortal world, but within this era where supernatural reign supreme, would dignity be worth something? As for people who are disappointed or feel appalled by the grammar at the start, you could keep it in you’re library to wait for the edit. So please be patient. Read the auxiliary chapter first. Join discord https://discord.gg/U3ufZ6 Not my picture. If the owner wish to take it down, please contact me.
Lin Hamill was an ordinary boy born in an extraordinary family. Burdened by the pressure and expectations that he failed to accomplish, he moved to an apartment to escape his family. He had no talent. He had no expectations. That was what he had thought until he met The Man Upstairs, who assigned him a mission. He was chosen and sent to an alternate Reality where magic existed among the masses. Similar to his original counterpart, the Lin from the Magical World also had no talent in magic. But this time he won't give up. Watch as Lin climbs the social hierarchy and unlocks the hidden truths of this world to accomplish his mission. [Your Mission: End this world in 1,000 years]
Our hero dies after defeating his main enemy and his soul return back to Earth. He have no goals so he become a otaku... Meteoroids crash onto the Earth land, and corpses start rising from their graves. Zombie roam the lands and mutate but for Feng Mei killing them is the same as crushing ants. Hell overlaps, gods counter attack. In the midst of the war between Gods and Demons, watch how Feng Mei plays them all. A will ancient, promise forgotten, prophecy of Evil, heavens dead is possible! All lives as pawn, a game of chess, a game played by placing one own's life at stake. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you like it, Then motivate me by voting with power stone Thanks!
On earth, there is one man who ruled every game that has ever been created - Zeke Elwood. A high school dropout turned gamer who has lived the rest of his life playing every kind of game. His fame increased like wildfire as he'd always prove to be the strongest, using the most unconventional methods. Life on earth became boring for him at this point until - an unknown game developer sent him the game called "Mythos". This sent him to another world, clearing a trial created by the three major gods and, getting chosen as their new champion. With all that took place, Zeke is given a [Gamer's System]. One which he'll use to beat all the records set by the humans who have been chosen before him.
I woke up in this world with a System and a sword. Without hesitation, I chose to complete the princess’ quest with my weapons: Arrogance. Cunning. Pride. I will lead guild Sol Invictus. Denizens of the 7 hells, respect me. Servants of the 11 heavens, know fear. Guild Invictus, know the suffering of training so you can wrest victory from the jaws of those who dare doubt you. This is a story about a snake named Tycondrius waking up in a fantasy world of swords and sorcery. There is action, violence, unapologetic murder, and arrogant displays of power. There is an emphasis on combat growth as well as psychological growth on more than a few members of Guild Invictus. There is camaraderie and also the inevitable comedic dialogue amongst manly men. There are even elements of romance and Tycon running away from terrifying, powerful women. (Did you know most female snakes eat their partners after mating?) Give this book a read. I hope some of these stories can inspire you to fight your battles with analytical intelligence, heroic courage, and ruthless lethality. Schedule: 12+ chapters per week. 2/day Mon-Fri. 1/day Sat-Sun @ 11:00 PDT Chapter Length: 1000+ words per chapter Here is my discord: https://discord.gg/NNbAj7N Constructive criticism and corrections welcome. Other Authors extra-welcome. Cover image credit: Johnabrash
Riley Petesgeralt is your everyday suburban high-schooler by day, and an avid gamer by night, easily cracking the top 50 player charts in the world’s top played MMORPG, World of Legends. However, after a spiritual encounter, his life is turned upside down. Both worlds collide, and now, his life is a roleplaying game? Follow Riley as he embarks on an adventure in adapting his new abilities to his everyday life, where he discovers "life" may not be as normal as it seems.
(Warning! This is a Dark novel) FAMILY OR HUMANITY? Elric's life completely changed as a fated stormy night ended up making him choose between his humanity or becoming a dragon - all with its dearest cost. Accepting his new fate, He soon realized he has taken a bite of power more than he can chew. A new world has been revealed and an unexpected journey to the world of the Elementals began as Elric tried to fix the mess he has made. Along with meeting unexpected friends and enemies, Elric was forced to redefine his goals as he struggled his way up to the final form of evolution and to unite the mysterious world he once thought he knew. 1 chapter daily!~ Cover Dragon source: https://www.uihere.com/free-cliparts/rage-of-bahamut-granblue-fantasy-final-fantasy-xii-dragon-bloodborne-1866079
Aragnar is a world of Sword and Magic. Here, the different Races live in their respective domains, protecting the legacies their ancestors build with blood and sweat. But still, the world of Aragnar had not yet been fully explored, and the powerful races contest much of its unexplored land and untapped resources. Ivan Jaeger, an ordinary boy from planet earth with extraordinary dreams, woke up one day in a young body on the verge of starvation and death. No one had known at that instant except the rats killed for the experience that with an exceptional aide, a bigger wolf had arrived in the world of Aragnar, who would make others feel like sheep. But that's not the reason for his acknowledgment to be known and feared as the Wolf of Aragnar. To know that, you need to follow Ivan Jaegar's journey throughout his famed adventures. You need to know in detail about his daily life and his Pursuits after Wealth, Power, Ambition, Military Glory, Eternal life and the greatest of all his goals 'Conquering the Beauties' *Wink* ------------------------------------------- Support the Author: https://ko-fi.com/rollingpandaa https://paypal.me/Rollingpandaa ------------------------------------------- 2 Chapter Per Day (0.00 am GMT+8) Time Approx) Bonus Chapters as per power stones donated by the end of the week. Vote with power stones. Give review. Suggestions and encouragement in the comment box. Also, read my other Novel 'The Pleasure Lord' Happy reading. ------------------------------------------- Tags: Weak to Strong, Comedy, Reincarnated, Shameless, Harem, Adventure, Beast Companions, Politics, GameElements, Magic&Swords, FantasyRaces ------------------------------------------- Discord-->Rollingpandaa#8813 Discord group for 'The Pleasure Lord'--https://discord.gg/8Xbe3qJ
In a place where Magic reigns supreme, what would our MC do as he finds himself being rejected by the world. This is the story of a boy who is unable to wield mana. After shaming his parents who are considered to be among the strongest Mages of the era. Our MC stands at the terrace of the School building planning to commit suicide. What has fate got stored in for our MC. Will he commit suicide ? If you want to know, join our MC as he struggles. ------------------------------------- All the characters and incidents in this story are imaginary. Please note that the chapter can be a bit slow. So please be a bit patient and read up to 50 chapter before making any opinion .......................... The Cover art is made by Valeriexx. Join the Discord : https://discord.gg/WTDaPfU DM me @ ReincarnatedSaint#2904 on Discord Support me : https://www.paypal.me/ReincarnatedSaint
Ayaan entered a portal that leads him to the world of magic. There, he received the legacy of the greatest demon to have lived under heaven, a magic library system he can use to level-up his magic powers. But great power requires one to pay a great price, too. Resulting in him losing his humanity! *** "Won't you reconsider taking her as one of your spouses?" "Fuck you, Birdy!!" "Hehe, curse all you want, but I can hear all your thoughts, you can't deceive me." *** "Can't you see how hot she is?" "No, I can't." "Then you must be gay." """___""" *** This is the story of the ordinary boy who will walk an extraordinary path. This is the story of love, betrayal, revenge, and tragedy. Follow Ayaan on his journey and find out dark-secrets of this new world. Tags: High-Fantasy, Magic, Male-Protagonist, Romantic-Subplot, No-Ntr, No-Rape, Evolution, Cultivation, Weak-Strong, Romance, Harem, R-18, Elemental-Magic, World-Travel, Mythical-Beasts, Legacy, System, Power-Up, Game-Element, Minor-Smut, Non-Human protagonist, Revenge, Adventure, Action, Secret-Dimensions, Beautiful-Female leads, Necromancy, Undead. Caring to his girls but ruthless to his enemies. ______________________________________________ Discord Server: https://discord.gg/DJqTQYd Discord Name: Eternal_Demon Instagram: Eternal_Demon1 ______________________________________________ The cover isn't mine. All credit goes to the artist.
Thrust into an enigmatic world born from bloodshed; venture inside its complexities, dark-side, and always changing nature. At the center, a boy; brought up by an exiled mage, steps into a life of independence. A test to try and change his life for the better after witnessing what war can do to a person. The walk towards finding a stable living gets toppled as a unique magical element awakens. Using people, toying with emotions, doing anything and everything to get what he wants, this is the life of the next Death Reaper. Mostly emotionless, life continues as questions about his state of mind and being remains clouded behind many personas. This isn’t the story of a single man, it’s the story of a whole world. Read as the world builds itself from the ground up. Conspiracies, evil, the dark side of humanity. In addition, tis the start of a new age; the birth of monsters – a story depicting the tales of the first heroes and demons to ever exist. The Wielder of Death Magic isn’t a typical fantasy. The heroes don’t summon forth power from heroes of old, here, the characters are the ones who make up the myths and legends for the next generation. Amidst the turmoil, Staxius, he lives on, watching and waiting as the world grows. P.S, I’m not that normal of a writer, my advice is to not expect anything going into this world. Forget everything, I personally, don’t care about rules and limitations and what can be considered to be the norm – the characters are given life, the world moves on its own; I’m just a spectator. No plot, nothing planned, all that you read is the product of the characters moving and acting individually. As opposed to me subjecting them with my emotions, the connection is reversed. They are the ones who dictate the story (Believe it or not, that's the way I write) A world, a story, characters, and the foolish author; we all evolve as one. On behalf of the people mentioned above, thanks for reading, I appreciate it all. [Cover is copyrighted by Sxperimental]
The Lord of Death is dead and the Abyss is in turmoil. While its most powerful denizens vie for control over Death’s seat, a young reaper named Morgana sees a golden opportunity. She hatches a plan to rise above the ranks of Death’s former servants and travels to the mortal plane in search of the perfect soul to become her accomplice. Leonardo Dante, the world’s greatest game developer, is dying tonight. As a young man he sold his soul to Death for more time to chase his dream. But as the sun sets on his life for the final time, he meets a strange teenage girl who offers him a choice; be reaped by her and join countless lost souls in the Abyss or help her bring order to Death’s domain by duping foolish mortals called gamers into selling their souls to her. Despite being conflicted by this fiendish request, Leo’s desire to finish his dream outweighs any guilty conscience, and so the pair forms a strange new partnership. Together they set out to create the ultimate gaming experience! RELEASE SCHEDULE: Daily Chapter releases at 9 - 10 PM GMT+8 Participating in the Webnovel #Spirity Awards for Spring 2020 -- so if you like the book so far, please don't forget to vote stones. Want to read more of my works? Check out THE FOOLHARDIES (ML-Fantasy) only on Webnovel. NEW COVER by OKAZE_ARTS - Sean Lumiano. Check him out on Instagram! Follow me on Twitter "@WhoisGDCruz" for updates on Game Master of Souls and Foolhardies.
Nero Valstine was a Level 799 Master Rank Digitizer in his previous life, titled as the Silver Death God who was feared across a mysterious VR World. He had been on a special Digital Quest hinting towards the revelation of the final treasure sought by many, a treasure that can grant any of its wielders wildest dreams. Moments away from accomplishing this task, a famed figure appeared and ended his hopes, giving him a fatal blow before stealing the artifact. Nero, who died with regret, and endless rage was sent into the cycle of rebirth to start over anew, can he achieve his greatest wish and desires once more? Or does fate has other plans? "To those who seek the greatest of all power, travel these lands and explore its endless boundaries." "To those who desire wealth beyond your imagination, venture this earth to unravel its endless riches." "To those who seek the unknown and universe's greatest mysteries, enter this realm and your answers will be found..." "Whatever you desire, so long as you venture this world and find my treasure, then all your wishes will come true..." With this resonant cry across the heavens, thus was the start of the age of Digitzers. ===Important Note=== This story is apart of the Spirity Awards Contest, if you really like it and would love to see it win, please feel free to show your support by dropping by a review, comments and even power stones, I shall greatly appreciate it. ===Release Details=== Daily release - 1 or 2 chapters (9:am - 12:pm) Mass release (Sundays)- Chapters Determined by Main Power Ranking 1 Extra Chapter (Top - 100) 2 Extra Chapter (Top - 50) 3 Extra Chapter (Top - 15) 4 Extra Chapters (Top - 5) ===Subscribe to my Mailing List to get exclusive access to works==== https://www.subscribepage.com/shadowsfinger_copy ===More of my works on Webnovel === ARIFT - https://www.webnovel.com/book/16131271505970705 LevelUp Family - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17397607105687205 Want to show some support? Drop by a Review and a Power Stone. You can also send me a Gift or Paypal Me :) https://www.paypal.me/shadowsfinger Want to read some more of my personal works? Check out below! https://www.patreon.com/ShadowsFinger https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07C7912KX Follow me on Twitter & Facebook & Discord: Discord - https://discord.gg/ffVV7cV Twitter -https://twitter.com/ShadowsFinger Facebook - https://www.facebook.com/ShadowsFingers/
I have failed but I will try again! There is no more failure in my second life! The 72 dungeons that have appeared on earth and their owners. As well as the awakened people. I am the hunter that devours them all.
Chase is a normal young man that loves anime very much. On one unfortunate day, he died... But whoever thought that he was able to get another chance by GOD at a new world as he been reincarnated back with his memories still intact. Reincarnated back in the world full of magic and demons, where Chase always just saw in those Anime! "EEHHH!!! I AM A RING!" Not as a living being but a ring... ------------------------------------------------ Info: The novel cover is not mine! I will remove them if you tell me. Update: I will also be updating 2 chapters daily, if I was really busy I will only upload 1 chapters Contact Me: instagram.com/ex_chaser
Synopsis: Remember when you were young, and your parents told you not to touch things that weren't yours? Well, Juin should have listened to that piece of advice before he touched an antique sword in a museum. Juin, an average human from Earth; a thin, well-known weakling who was afraid of his own shadow and was basically everyone’s favorite punching bag. One day, he accidentally summoned a demon from another world. And the worse part was… He summoned a demon king who had the emotional maturity of a teenager and the mouth of a sailor. With Juin's fear of basically everything and the arrogant demon king who was afraid of nothing, what would the 16-year-old's life be from now onward? xxx Note from author: Except for first chapter, which is a prologue and set in another dimension, the rest of volume one would focus mostly on Earth. The first volume would focus Lucifer and Juin's developments, especially the latter's development both in skills and character. It might seem a little slow pace at first, but that's because I'm trying to build a piece everything up one by one, giving you a better immersion as you journey through the Demon King's Cowardly vessel. Honestly, I would love to hear your opinions on the development of the characters and the world. If you like to discuss more with me, please go to the discord link below. https://discord.gg/Bva8QhZ And if you would like to support me monetarily outside of WN, please consider buying me a ko-fi at the link below. Every ko-fi helps in my journey to be the very best, like no one ever was... (lame, I know) https://ko-fi.com/luoyeyouling Regards, LuoYe [ NOTE : The cover is only meant to be temporary, until I save enough to commission an original. ]
When I was 15-years-old, during the year that I graduated from middle school, my father told me this. “The Devil’s blood runs in our family.” That was the truth. Sadly my father was the owner of a takeaway chicken shop with the talent of turning his eyes blue, and I was the son of the takeaway shop who just happened to be slightly stronger than others. But five years later. They came for me.
The time has come! The Earth had been chosen to become another victim of the universal scheme and so part of its lands along its residents transport to another world! Reigner is one of those and this is his story. Come and see how Reigner deals with new, another world and the reincarnations with his Item Creation System!
"I can't die even if I try," Ryder Flynn was one of the strongest Magic Knights. But his life was turned upside down when he was killed because of a glitch in the game. He gained a system and transferred back in time to the time he started playing Divinity. Things take a strange turn when he becomes the King of the strongest demons in the Virtual Realm. That was not enough as he also gained a godly item inside the game, which basically made him immortal. The skill gave him the power that every time he dies, the time rewinds by 1 day. But why did that item follow him to the real world? Life is full of mystery and problems. From the small obstructions like Ancient cultivation families of the real world to the bigger problem that was his own fierce Demon Army in the virtual realm and even bigger problems that was his own system. Why is the virtual world so realistic? Is it really just a game or something more? Warning: Read the Pinned Review by me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Buy me a coffee and support me on Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/deangel Patreon: Patreon.com/DeAngel Join my discord:https://discord.gg/2AGkydg
Maxwell (Max) Walker was your everyday college student. Until his Role Playing character forcefully switched places with him. Now Max has to live the life of his character in a world of both science and magic. Suffer everything he made him suffer. Fight every battle he made him fight. Join Max in his journey to return home while paying for his past decisions. Author: Kasaix Edited by: ZombieCat090 P.S For anyone interested we also have a discord channel where you can interact with me and other fans https://discord.gg/JmaHGF5
Lazar is a man shaped by his past. Forced into exile when he was only a child, his only ambition in life was to become strong enough to take revenge. Years later, having completed his training in the American special forces, he was preparing to return to his native country to settle accounts. But again life played a trick on him... The Gods announced the Apocalypse and monsters coming from different mythologies and folklores were unleashed on Earth. Having basically the duty to fight in this war against evil, they finally decided to abandon humans leaving them a system that allows them to evolve, to know more about their enemy and the situation of the world. Lazar will not only have to survive, which is already quite difficult, but he will also realize that he has a role to play in this Apocalypse by leading those who will become his new family. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello, I'm Barbare, the author. I hope you will like this novel and that you will help me improve it if you have something to criticize, I already wrote a novel in the past but I am far from being an expert after all. If you like it let me know by adding it to your library or vote for it. I hope you have as much fun reading as I wrote, or more because the writing process is not always fun. Good reading PS: The cover is not from me so if it's your work contact me.
In a world filled with abilities and superpowers, Moby Kane, a 16-year-old boy, is an orphan who is living his life with a little too much optimism, trying his best to get by. Due to him having no ability, he had been bullied and tortured every day. However, for some odd reason, he never complained and always stayed happy no matter what. It was almost unnatural. On one cruel day of immense pain, he realized that the world is a cruel unforgiving place, regaining senses. In his moment of desperation, a miracle happend. [ You have unlocked the Demon System ] Now that Moby has the power to change his cruel destiny, how will he use it to get back at the world that wronged him on the road to becoming the demon lord... Support the author! ----------------------------------------------------------- https://www.paypal.com/paypalme/AuthorDrip ----------------------------------------------------------- https://discord.gg/8UbWP2 -----------------------------------------------------------
Hai! A shameless five stars review by myself. For you who love reading my story, thank you so much! And for those who still hesitating if you should give it it a try or not, well, don't hesitate anymore, give it a try! But if it's not your taste, then I'm so sorry for that. And for those who frustrated with how the grammars were, how the wording were, or even wanted to give some suggestions on how the story would develop, please give some comments in the comment section, I will always read every comments of you guys! Last but not least, please have a good read! :)
I was slightly intrigued by the title and decided to give this a try. Some parts were interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how I'd go in the next chapters. There was a lot of 'action' happening in the first chapter, which was good. It could definitely benefit from having an editor, however. I'll see how the rest goes, then.
Nice writing. It is easy to read and captivating. I love the themes introduced. The story grabs your attention from the first chapter. The only problem is that you were too vague about what was happening in the first chapters. Especially that dream after death with the blond girl and all. The backstory is too foggy. However the present is beautifully depicted and interesting. The MC also seems like a promising badass. Great potential.
I will say this - Book plot has potential to compete for top 10 power ranking but the quality of English translation and composition of sentences leaves too much to desire. some times proper verbs are not there sometime correlation between person's action and response do not click together. so it's my humble request to author to go over everything again and edit all the discrepancies for a seamless reading experience for the audience.
I haven't read the story but I wanted to give the author feedback regarding the synopsis, or lack thereof. I get that writing a synopsis can be hard, but that's no excuse for not having one. What you've got right now completely lacks any information regarding what this story is actually about. It doesn't even introduce the character in any meaningful way. After reading what's there, I have no idea what to expect, and as such I have no desire to take a random chance when my time could be better spent playing Warframe, Jedi Fallen Order, or Destiny 2. A synopsis is a sales pitch, and right not I don't even know what you're selling.
First of all, i must say, First line is OP and it got me hooked making me ask myself the same question. First chapter is superb and it got me reading and I thought the author improved a lot. Second point is the 2nd chapter I saw some/few grammatical error but its fine, I read through it and here comes the 3rd chapter and here is where im at rn. I tried to mark the errors/mistakes ive seen to try and help our author gain more readers ;) I give first chapter top marks, very interesting and captivating. Keep it up and dont stop in the middle. I believe in you ;)
I think so far it’s relatively put together. The fact your thrown into an unknown world is a used, but interesting scenario in this case. The fights seem well thought out though not quite as detailed as I’d like. The characters seem a bit... “Trope-y” like their stereotypical but they seem to mesh well together. So besides some minor flaws to be polished just by experience I think it has some potential as a novel depending on where the author goes.
Having read through this novel I have a few things to say. One, the Author's grammar has improved quite a bit from before! Two, I see that his plotting is as good as ever, the story is interesting and compelling so I'd definitely be giving this story I read if I were you! Three, The MC is quite nice too and it's interesting to follow his story, this book is definitely one you'd wanna check out! So go ahead and do so already!
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