Item: Death system
Rating: 5

MaxwellKHALv44yr

2020-05-01 16:31

Here is my shameless review although I'm not the author. This book is simply magnificent, the way that he wrote was something to be talked about. Overall, I will call this one a masterpiece. The plotting was good and not boring. TRY THIS OK!!!!

Death system

RandomGuy

4.7

77 Chs

Liked by 32 people

Replies9

Jinmori72kLv3

Wtf it's only on chapter 5,how do you know it's a master piece

4yr

MaxwellKHALv4

Hmm, it's just my personal opinion. It can differ between one person and another. I just have the feeling that it is.

Jinmori72k:Wtf it's only on chapter 5,how do you know it's a master piece

4yr

Lissa_356Lv11

They're not wrong

4yr

PeryiteLv5

Unexpected someone who love’s to make military novels would put a five stare review on a fantasy noval🤣👍

4yr

jinmori_monkeykingLv2

5xp

Jinmori72k:Wtf it's only on chapter 5,how do you know it's a master piece

4yr

DaoistNdGczsLv4

wow

4yr

ErrolstromLv12

i will try this👍

4yr

darth45013Lv11

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4yr

darth45013Lv11

it's ok so far

4yr

Other Reviews

ReinSTRLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr

RandomGuyAuthor

Hai! A shameless five stars review by myself. For you who love reading my story, thank you so much! And for those who still hesitating if you should give it it a try or not, well, don't hesitate anymore, give it a try! But if it's not your taste, then I'm so sorry for that. And for those who frustrated with how the grammars were, how the wording were, or even wanted to give some suggestions on how the story would develop, please give some comments in the comment section, I will always read every comments of you guys! Last but not least, please have a good read! :)

4yr

xNurieLv11

I was slightly intrigued by the title and decided to give this a try. Some parts were interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how I'd go in the next chapters. There was a lot of 'action' happening in the first chapter, which was good. It could definitely benefit from having an editor, however. I'll see how the rest goes, then.

4yr

Tyquan_CraigLv13

I think this novel is really amazing, good story plot and great characters and power systems the author really out did him self with this piece of art work.

4yr

IdioticBakaLv3

I dont know wether your aware of it or not but there was a story like this before, 5 to 6 years ago, i think? Anyway you can find it in this site so maybe you should take the chance at getting writing materials... I kinda forgot the title of that storry, so you'll have to find it on your own...

4yr

ThePotatoKingLv14

Nice writing. It is easy to read and captivating. I love the themes introduced. The story grabs your attention from the first chapter. The only problem is that you were too vague about what was happening in the first chapters. Especially that dream after death with the blond girl and all. The backstory is too foggy. However the present is beautifully depicted and interesting. The MC also seems like a promising badass. Great potential.

4yr

Indrid_KohlLv15

All in all I t is an interesting read. Definitely on the odd side but worth reading. Can't wait for more chapters to be released to find out what happens next.

4yr

GABallerLv13

I haven't read the story but I wanted to give the author feedback regarding the synopsis, or lack thereof. I get that writing a synopsis can be hard, but that's no excuse for not having one. What you've got right now completely lacks any information regarding what this story is actually about. It doesn't even introduce the character in any meaningful way. After reading what's there, I have no idea what to expect, and as such I have no desire to take a random chance when my time could be better spent playing Warframe, Jedi Fallen Order, or Destiny 2. A synopsis is a sales pitch, and right not I don't even know what you're selling.

4yr

Shin07Lv3

ah a new place to dump powerstones daily now i need more characters in this review so i will continue to type as you can see as of this point i have 154 characters well now 178 i will now send the review

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