Reviews of DC : Power Gacha System
DC : Power Gacha System
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terrible. this is terrible π. sure there are some villains in Gotham that need to be put down permanently like the joker. but most of them don't. as they're just using any means they can to make a living. as living in Gotham is not easy. if it's anything like Detroit or Chicago or some of the other worst cities in the real world. while Batman does a lot of good things. he isn't actually solving the underline issues in Gotham. As to why there's so much crime in the first place? As these issues most likely stem from politics and as Batman's identity as Bruce Wayne is in one of the best positions to actually fix these political issues by backing a candidate with his money or running himself for the mayor of Gotham. in which he can use to affect change to improve the job opportunities for the people of Gotham. as people in Gotham have most likely turned to crime because there aren't very many good job opportunities. which probably drove most to crime and others to depression and given the atmosphere of Gotham only added to depression to the point it made some of them crazy. The most messed up part of Gotham's problem's is the guy who could effectively change this is out in the streets in a bat costume punching criminals in the face living out some type of 10 year old child fantasy of being a superhero.
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Another example of a cliche approach to characters in another universe, especially ones like DC or Marvel. There is no human attributes, no human quality and no actual human thought to the approach. You develop zero background for the character and make them a blank slate, which isn't great for the reader. The quality of grammar is decent, as seen instantly in the synopsis, however, you can really improve in how you describe the action taking place. Show us what is happening, rather than telling us.
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