Review Detail of ReviewerAndy in DC : Power Gacha System

Another example of a cliche approach to characters in another universe, especially ones like DC or Marvel. There is no human attributes, no human quality and no actual human thought to the approach. You develop zero background for the character and make them a blank slate, which isn't great for the reader. The quality of grammar is decent, as seen instantly in the synopsis, however, you can really improve in how you describe the action taking place. Show us what is happening, rather than telling us.