Danmachi: The Blade-Bound

My only problem that it seems to be heavily AI ridden. Like everything is very superfluous and it has too much of a fluttery vocabulary which drawls out paragraphs a lot. If it isn't AI, fix the way you write to be more efficient but still sounding nice and grammatically correct. If it is in fact AI edited then you should read over what the AI changed and fix what sounds weird or cut things to be shorter. You can also take examples of how some AI sentences are structured and incorporate the grammar and sentence structure without having unneeded drawn out words.

keep mc single, women make you weaker. or let him have crazy dad lore first

seems pretty interesting and i cant find anything too annoying so far so my hopes are rising, the plot development is quite smooth so no worries there, ill make a proper review after this gets alot more chapters.

A pretty good one, the only problem here is that the first couple of chapters are edited by AI, so you will have a feeling that the chapters are artificial, but later the author stopped using it, so the quality improved a lot. Besides this, everything else is pretty much above average, a good read to pass the time.

Very good so far. One thing I would like to recommend is that you don't make it harem, this tends to ruin this type of book. As a love interest I would put Riveria as she has virtually no contact with bell. Otherwise, keep writing this book because it looks good.

Overall very good kinda gives me some vibes from looking foward to another world novel but with different ideas though wish there was more chapters popped out

nice

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Genuinely an incredible start has a slow beginning but picks up quick and the author has a way of grasping the world that is Danmachi that makes it immersive. Great read

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