ertrision1492

Very good so far. One thing I would like to recommend is that you don't make it harem, this tends to ruin this type of book. As a love interest I would put Riveria as she has virtually no contact with bell. Otherwise, keep writing this book because it looks good.

Basically an incel

and the knight or commander who is in the camp?

As far as I've read it's one if not the best high school of the dead fanfic I've read. I hope you keep writing it because it is very good. My favorite chapter so far is the parting words, I liked how Nagi interact with the woman and how he brings her to an end. (Translator)

So far everything I've read written by you has been very good. And now watching you write about my favorite video game is pretty cool. Cheer up with the story, I'm sure it will be incredible.

the mc is very dumb but somehow i get it