good idea, very bad execution you are giving MC the master sword when he opens his eyes, a hyrulian shield Christmas tree when he enters the deku tree and the triforce before killing the spider the STATs you should not have combined them, let's do a small mathematical operation STR, End, Dex, agi, mind 1500 each = 7500 per level Pow?, surv?, durability? each 1500 = 4500 stats at level 5 7500 x5 = 37,500 4500 x5 = 22,500 and how are those parameters supposed to work? follow me on the journey POWER(strg+mind) niall enters the gym, how does he lift the bar? with his noodle arms, uses his space centrifuge with penetrating damage or simply uses reality warper POWER to turn him into a dog SURVAVILITY(end+agi) wants to do Parkour but has never run or jogged, he got punched without even try to dodge, it's a turret magician glasscanon Durability???(dexterity) what? hand eye coordination what is that??? please don't describe how to cook the knife will be buried in his hand OKAY I want you to answer this WHERE IS THE STRUGGLE in this power fantasy, Fights or physical handicap? He can hit above his level from level 1, love or friendships? Nothing here, I remember reading that he wanted to meet people but he told them to go to hell as soon as he saw them, morality neutral chaotic, not enough to be a psychopath, conspiracies??? It seems to me that you skipped the most conspiratorial character in the novel(Hermes) da fak

una historia en el punto de vista de sus comerciantes con una opinion de su mercado interno me gusta la industria que plantea te engancha con su construcción de mundo que te da pequeñas gotitas de historia y te hace especular que mas habra por ver