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While the book has some grammar issues, the author is actively improving, and it doesn't take too much away from the experience. I really enjoy sci-fi, and this take on the genre was an interesting and enjoyable one to read.

Grammar is quite lacking, but writer is good with his words, descriptions are okay, reading line upon line of <blah> <blah> <blah> is very boring, don't like the way you did his thoughts,could be more intriguing but there's potential.

Interesting Pot and creative writing, especially that first chapter, it gave me chills. its a great work, keep posting. Looking Forward to it

i like the cover amd improving grammars. and it's good to enjoy while you have time. and i'm a fan of the mc, jack. he was amazing character. good luck author

What can I say aside from "amazing"? Sci-fi isn’t as easy to write as something can think it is. The synopsis is so-so in terms of writing but the message that it’s telling us, which is the current situation of humans, etc. but it can be proofread and revised and it’ll be easy to understand. The author knows it himself that there’s grammatical errors and yes, it’s improving. Despite those, the details, scenes, and messages that he wanted to convey were still there and just by managing to do it is already enough to make us read the rest of the chapters. The first two chapters didn’t fail me, like bro- it’s amazing. I was amazed. Go read it now!

you have updated and fixed the grammar mistakes very well compared to what I have read earlier. Good job. The grammar is good and it doesn't affect the story which means it's good grammar. nice paragraph break and punctuations usage. The story is nicely written and I like androids and robots very much. But I feel like you are info-dumping. Just take it slow and steady. You don't want readers to be overloaded by the information they receive. The character design is neither good nor bad. It's tough to judge with little chapters to read. but there is not much worse in character creation. But hey you can change that in the future. I don't know what's running in the author's mind so I don't know what he intends to do. the updating stability is just good. I don't have any words for that. What I liked the most in the novel is the world's background and worldbuilding. He explained much information about robots but some people might find it as info dumping

Well, I can tell after a few chapters that this novel is a well-built and detailed, worth of time masterpiece. Even the genre is a far from me, I still enjoyed it pretty much, I can only recommend! The only thing from my perspective is the story kinda has a slow progress, but this is just my opinion.

Really interesting story! The plot is unique, the first few chapters read like a Dead Space novel and really draw you in. Jack is an awesome MC.

Although the book has some minor grammatical errors, it's still relatively better than I expected. The book has a very good and interesting premise with interesting synopsis (although it also has errors). I just hope the author releases more content... peace.

Nice chapter length. The starting was interesting, it felt straight out of a star trek movie * not star wars. It felt more star trek than star wars. The premise was all good and fine, but I think that the clutter could be a little avoided on.

I love the story so much though the first chapter might be a bit confusing, the following chapters are really great,I mean it when I say great. Thanks for a wonderful story. Am waiting for the next update.

Usually sci-fi is not my cup of tea but I can’t this story’s plot is very intriguing. The author knows how to world buil and keep the readers hooked up chapter after chapter. I love the authr’s point of view as well! Good job

Overall this is a great start to an amazing novel. I like the action of the plot this far and how it carries emotion with each dialog. [img=update][img=update]