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you have updated and fixed the grammar mistakes very well compared to what I have read earlier. Good job. The grammar is good and it doesn't affect the story which means it's good grammar. nice paragraph break and punctuations usage. The story is nicely written and I like androids and robots very much. But I feel like you are info-dumping. Just take it slow and steady. You don't want readers to be overloaded by the information they receive. The character design is neither good nor bad. It's tough to judge with little chapters to read. but there is not much worse in character creation. But hey you can change that in the future. I don't know what's running in the author's mind so I don't know what he intends to do. the updating stability is just good. I don't have any words for that. What I liked the most in the novel is the world's background and worldbuilding. He explained much information about robots but some people might find it as info dumping