What can I say aside from "amazing"? Sci-fi isn’t as easy to write as something can think it is. The synopsis is so-so in terms of writing but the message that it’s telling us, which is the current situation of humans, etc. but it can be proofread and revised and it’ll be easy to understand. The author knows it himself that there’s grammatical errors and yes, it’s improving. Despite those, the details, scenes, and messages that he wanted to convey were still there and just by managing to do it is already enough to make us read the rest of the chapters. The first two chapters didn’t fail me, like bro- it’s amazing. I was amazed. Go read it now!
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