DestroKind
This story is top notch. Now don't be put off by the genderbender as it does not affect the story whatsoever. There are no grammar errors to point out and the story flows smoothly. The interactions are good and well cute. I am looking forward to more as we rarely find good female MCs. About the world building part, I am not sure as not much as been shown but judging by the wish it seems great. Anyway it's a hidden gem worth reading.
Just found this and noticed it had no reviews after reading it, so I'll leave one. The writing quality is top notch with good sized chapters, the world and character building is steady and interesting and I can't wait to see how the story progresses, I would however like to see more character interaction as she grows, with less info dumpiness(mainly just the magic development, it's good, I've just read early magic development one too many timesπ) overall just keep it up and it'll be great π
This novel is very good. Although from the moment until now(for me ch.21) things have been pretty slow, it is understandable because the MC is in its infancy, where she doesn't have much liberty, which makes it a good time to expand the world, which to the author's credit, is done very well, a very promising novel at it's cradle. Writing-wise, it is well done, can't find much to nitpick, probably because I'm not an expert at English, but oh well. I have mentioned the pacing before, and the elements in the story are well detailed. Regarding stability, from the info I can gather, this novel was updating daily until the new year, I do not know what happened to Mr.Author, but I can only be sincere and say that three months is a lot of waiting, and I want to encourage the author to keep writing, because this novel has very promising aspects and a good writing quality in general, wish to read more of this very much. The characters are detailed, and until now, have not shown much complexity, mostly because this novel is just starting, I can only say that the main character is growing to be cute, is smart and determined, can't say much else, but it is not bad in any way. The world looks very promising being a futuristic magitech one, a lot can be built upon it and it's potential only depends on the Author's creativeness, as he has already inserted some interesting concepts, all is good and I trust that the author will build this world very well. Again, from the time this review is being written, the novel is only at it's beginnings and there is not much to be reviewed, with me mostly just betting on the Author to keep a good work, if you want an calm, magic related and cute novel, this one is a good one, if it hasn't been dropped, I hope not... Really. I just want to see this grow.
Mmm... whayt should I say... The Mc have some sort of OCD or Fetish on Cute Female's, His... decision is full of absurdity and the world is... not much... this is a Gender bender mc. Mc is Naive, has Happy go lucky personality ( try referring it to Naruto on his Child hood ) He's a man child... Also who the heck use an Old SHOVEL ( of all things... ) as your Bond Weapon_object in the Multi world threat. The Side characters are not worth mentioning, I haven't read it pass 6 but... the sheer absurdity is just... *Shiver*. The only worthy of it is the English language quality ( probably his mother language which is Rare... But wasted on this... Mc or story, ) Sorry author but the Chats are all 5 star and im not even sure if they're properly rating.
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