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I think you build the world background to forced, why would decker write about common knowledge in his journel. I think it would make more sense if Jacob reads the book and prices the O formation together. For example: He read that decker mentioned rarer species, common and uncommon species. he also called rarer dogs. This way Jacob can analyze this information and know that means that there is a species more powerful than rarer, this adds also a little bit of mystery.
it would be great if there was a hidden class branch. It would be great because, if there are 6 entities and 6 class branches there would be a correlation between them.
a world as big as a star is very vague, the sun is a star and big however there are other stars which are 4 times the size of the sun. So can you clarify it a little bit more
I think you mean Female not Famale
I think you mean antics not antiques. Antiques are very old things and antics fit the situation better